NouraChan

Dialogue is pretty simplistic and basic. Dedicated proofreading would help greatly. Grammatical errors, especially tenses are too rampant. Also, you should put in the description that there is a strong religious connotation, bordering on preaching in this story. Too bad.

Nice story, I like it a lot. ...️

loved both books , hopefully there will be a book 3 and more after that...

more chaps pls

this book is really great to read

Finally!!! ...

so far I lovethe

The story is amazing. Errors can be corrected. Keep writing more...

Very beautiful and interesting story

Oh it’s a series? My bad, I’ll start with the first book then….I got up to chapter 8 on this and like what I’ve read so far…thanks writer

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beautiful story n enjoyed the read...