What bullshit. Mc acts naive, lucky protagonist brain and not even 14 chapter there's already a girl which going to be in harem probably.
Does the f.u.c.k superst.i.t.ious thing ever stop? It's super annoying.
A little annoyed with MC. He already has Liu Guang, why be so nosy when it comes to Bai Rui? Clearly Bai Rui wants nothing to do with MC yet MC keeps meddling with matters here and there.Idk who the ML is yet. Either the [caring tsundere] Liu Guang or the [cold loner] Bai Rui.I'd rather ship MC with Liu Guang. Bai Rui x MC seems forced (Cuz MC is so sticky and nosy when it comes to Bai Rui.)
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It was a fun read too bad you havent updated in like a year or so, but I enjoyed reading it and the fact that the others are gonna reincarnate there too is pretty cool. Overall a good liitle fanfic.
Your reverse harems are always a hit with me! Yes, hit me one more time with Paris, Rin, and Daisuke! I will not ask for more! thank you for the Book II! I'm an absolute fan!
It is an awesome novel I couldn't find anything wrong with the novel Character development ,world background etc is perfect I hope author will continue with the great work
seriously every week the new translation is becoming more and more absurdly mess can't they just picked a good one without describing how invincible the mc is sigh... this week picked sucks even more
this review is just for qi shan...I don't know what was author thinking but this forced comedy ruined everything.If you are not confident in a thing...dont do it because it ruins the fun. I thought mc was ruthless and wasn't someone who forgets to take revenge but nvm, when he had the change to take revenge on qi shan of 2 years of torture, she had done on the mc...what did he do? he behaved like a scardy cat even after system slave master contract. qi shan even said that she cant disobey his commands...oof so disappointing.