Loved this story except for getting names mixed up
Loved the story but Where is the rest of it? So many lose ends, it can’t finish this way.
Feels disconnected and can give you whiplash in terms of direction. Could make a drinking game out how many times MC says she loves food. Promising idea of a story with immature execution. Next time outline story before writing and I think you’ll have better execution.
Hello to my wonderful readers.
Thank you for being so patient with me over the last month. I have had some tough times in my personal life which has resulted in my updates being so slow. I’m trying to get back up to speed for you all. What I can say is we aren’t far off from the end <3
Couldn't take how this is dragging on so I jumped around. Can anyone tell me what Charlene has on Brandon? Usually he'd be a tough guy yet he's letting her manipulate him. If I were her I'd say goodbye adios and move on with my life and tell him to stay with Charlene he's blown it with me.
This work is rather captivating bro....keep it up
good story
I really love this book, Go author
Absolutely loved this book! So well written and such a great story. A must read!!!
An excellent story! Their love story was stormy from the beginning and full of misunderstandings. Interesting plot, I liked it!
is there going to be more chapters because this is good I like it
loving it, nice book