Without question this is a great master piece that anyone has to fall for. (Personal opinion)With such a great author. I can only ask for more chapters. Keep it up author.???
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this book is ok short chapters, low amount of chapters any novel under 120 chapters with locked ones is automatically bad for me. Ya I think the author is just money hungry like a game dev nowadays only making stuff to milk money from it. Tbh I think there should be a 100 chapter minimum before you can lock chapters.
the story progressed fine at first, then it became a sorrowful pity party of unfulfilled threats and failed urgency that has the slow burn of a middle school fight. I like the story but I have read at least 8 chapters of petty squabbling, abuse, pointless fevers, and situations that could have been better if more communication and trust was shown instead of naivety.
Wow! It's an interesting and amazing story with a captivating plot! I like the way you described the scenarios! Like it a lot! Hope to see more of the good work!
Similar to "This Curse is Awesome"Hopefully it's good. Waiting for the trial read.................................................................
The story seem lacking.the author makes essos seem weak and small and didnot have proper knowledge of GOT and how reality work.You should read Game of Thrones : The Norther Realms to get the feel of got.
I’m assuming you read the version on Wattpad and you are just putting it on this platform.
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i don't review Novels much but for this one I have to the story is amazing you'll get hooked on the first couple of chapters with the awesome plot and hilarious story with plenty of world building and character development I would 100% recommend reading
Writing Quality?-Since the writer is creating a Orginal Novel be wary of words being mixed up like "he" or "her". So just look at the rest of the sentence and you'll get the general idea. Also some parts when hes explaing some general infromation thats needed may seem like too much sometimes, however keep in mind its the authors passion showing through. Otherwise its pretty good qaulity.Stability of Updates?-So far no general hiccups. Keep in mind authors in the beginning may burn out. I dont want that here but its a reality.Story Development?-The author has done a great job of mixing both present information, future possiblites, and potential relationships that we as readers should keep in mind. Character Design?-The MC is develping slow and steady based off his upbringing and adventuring into the world. Nothing off putting like annyoing arrogance, cold blooded killing machine, pansy, however some people might not like the amount of romance introduced already. Keep in mind by Ch 72 theres 1 for sure harem member, 1 in the process but will take a lot of time to come around, and lastly 1 more that has her own interesting qualities. The MC isnt a pervert, but a young horny dude that wants to be with beautiful women if given the opportunity. While some novels create female leaders with no substance this one dosent. No close friends yet since most people his age are too weak.Lastly, while one of the tags say Overpowered its mainly because its still in the beginning and the author has givin the MC a strong foundation few can match in his current realm so there arent many strong enemies yet to match him so be patient if thats a issue.World Background?-Th author has done a good job contrasting his present situation, the plethora of galaxies out there, and how the MC will get there step by step. Not too much is given beyond the scope of his current realm as that isnt needed yet so sit back and enjoy the ride.That leaves 1 potentailly MAJOR issue for some readers.. why am I putting it way down here? Well its the MC raping a potential love interest (Not the one in the beginning) and while I would not read any novel that has rape there is one exception. Its where the MC is forced to have sex with a women after being given a power boost to offset the rapid rise. This situation if done right is where the MC feels remorse towards his actions and is willing to take responsibilty then I am letting it slide assuming it wont happen again. This novel is the execption. Others Ive read that do the same are "Ancient Godly Monarch" & "Chaotic Sword God". Both great novels that have a rape sence.If youve come this far get to it and read!!