I love this story from the beginning to the end is a top notch. Ivy is just a bad sister. Well the novel is awesome, it's a must to try out. Just added to collections
The book is great, i feel very good resonance with it, it's not your normal weak mc or too op one, this mc Is likeable and in middle. Also the story background and premise are perfect for those easy going readers. OVERALL ID SAY YOU OUTDID YOURSELF AUTHOR SAN
Good mid tier. The writing is decent, the smut is decent, the development is okay. MC might be a bit retarded, but some of his actions seem realistic. But who doesn't understand what 'control' means? Either way, it was fun while it lasted but I don't see myself ever paying to read.
Wow, your story is amazing! The characters are really well developed, and I love how the plot moves forward. Every chapter makes me want to read more, especially with those cliffhangers
it was a good read soo far. imma add it to my library and stock up the chapters ??
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First fan here! This one is a hidden gem! It's difficult to figure out where the story is heading off, but it's part of its charms! I highly recommend it to everyone who loves fantasy novels with strong female main character with a doth of romance and comedy!
Cool power system and a solid start, mc name pretty weird tho, morphus edgy beo 5 stars 5 stars 5 stars 5 stars 5 stars 5 stars 5 stars 5 stars
Serious novel abt some seriouse topics really engaging story
Cool... Female Lead... Definitely Cool...First of all this is my second or third time reading a female lead.. but now I'm started to think female leads are way cooler.. I don't know maybe it's because I'm bored of reading male lead or something ... in them... everything is like it's obviously going to happen but female leads are like... "hmmmm... cool... kick his a**"....So about this work, it's interesting you have a princess and her family murder case and then [spoiler. Nahh..go read it yourself and find out]..Secondly about the grammatical errors and all... there are but not that many to break your flow of reading...you can enjoy it.Lastly.. it's a good work... everyone should try it... and thanks author for his hard work.
chapter one is real good. And the cliffhanger at the end of the chp. You can already fell that the ex team mates are gonna come back to beg him back. Like those amines whereby the weakest leave the group and comes back overpowered. Real good man!
I am just excited as I have read the football part in this novel. Hahaha! I know you guys might be confused. Come on. Football club is a business too. I just want to say I am loving this. Please write a football novel after this!