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Love love love this. I don’t want to stop reading it. Can’t wait for new updates!!!!!!!
Wow, nice synopsis
More updates author!!
This is so interesting
Loved this story.. can’t wait to read the next book
They both have pride...well two imperfect people makes the best couple but then I don't like the fact that Annie is being free with Luke, she should get closer to Travis instead and melt his cold heart.
Author please do something... and are you still going to drop another update tonight?
Thrilling.
Another perfect book. I love this series. make sure you read the books in order. This book is edited well with proper grammar.
Has me hooked!
Nice work. Interesting and very creative, kudos.
It's alright, I understand your perspective. You enjoy the story despite its flaws, possibly because it broadens your literary experience. The main character, unfortunately, comes across as weak and makes poor decisions, falling victim to various characters' schemes. The fact that she sacrifices her son's well-being by not seeking help from the duke or her wealthy uncle angers you. It's surprising how long she avoids her only support while struggling and not utilizing the opportunities to improve their lives, like pursuing writing through her uncle's connections.
The plot, in your view, calls for a strong external influence, such as a system or a protagonist from another world, to intervene and provide a better future for her son. Despite your frustration, you still appreciate the translation and hope it continues.
Essentially, it's a heartwarming tale about a gong indulging in a gentle pampering session, with a touch of mpreg (male pregnancy) for added sweetness. The story may lack深度 in plot, but considering its light-hearted, romantic nature, I can overlook the simplicity since it was an enjoyable read.
I truly adored this novel. It has a melancholic and tragic appeal that I enjoy, but often, authors sacrifice character intelligence for that effect, which detracts from the reading experience. I find it frustrating when the main characters' (MCs) or love interests' (MLs) incompetence causes their downfall, without any prior effort or growth.
In contrast, the protagonist here is proactive yet grounded within her limits. She openly expresses her emotions, which stands out against the typical reclusive and anti-social archetypes. It's a breath of fresh air.
My one concern is that I hope the author won't make the ML's redemption too facile. At the current stage, it seems difficult to justify how they could atone for their past actions. Another pet peeve of mine is when authors set up a complicated situation for the ML but then offer an easy escape from their consequences. Redemption should be earned, not handed over on a silver platter just because they are the ML. A permanent separation, with the Duke acknowledging his mistakes, would be satisfactory. If not, I'd prefer it if they genuinely apologized and sought forgiveness for years, because I believe healing such deep trauma requires more than a superficial apology.
