Captivating story... the characters emotions and dialogues are on point. Kudos author, looking forward to more chapters...
The story is too good loved it...
Oh I loved the story so far... It was beautiful...I'm more than happy to know the actual truth of Jay... Many hurdles are waiting for them still I'm happy to know, they will be together
Hi, Yuriz! I enjoyed reading your story so far. Keep going, I can't wait what will happened next. Btw, do you have social media to discuss your story further?
wondering if this book is going to be updated or finished?
The antagonist plotline is resolved very quickly and it leaves the rest of the story to be a fairy tale with no controversy. Towards the end the chapters become one big blob with no paragraph breaks and no quotations when people are speaking. The story has potential, but needs some polishing.
Please tell me your thoughts on this book.
please update soon...
I truly loved this book. The author did an excellent job. The characters developed as the story went along. The plots and twists left me on the edge of my seat. I hope I get to read another story soon.
forbidden love plus a slice of danger... intriguing and exciting ............
This book was amazing
When will you update