A good review for a good start hehehe. Brother MoonZkun is such a cheater he made a review first i told him that to wait for me.. Keep continue your novel mr author we support you. Kukukuku. If you gonna make another LN i like pokemon stuff the older generation and maybe danmachi for fanfic or anything with a game attribute or system kukuku. Just saying if you had a mental block issue for future. Thanks for the novel
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Underated story, hope it picks up steam. The only problem I see is to many waifus to early. Maby kill 1 or 2 and then wait alot more to get some extra lovin. I really like it but at the same time can see how people wont like it. Try and make it a bit more realistic and take out a bit of the ***.
keep it up
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I Was wondering if this is still being worked on or is it dropped
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Nice story. I like it's development very much.The MC is also smart and intelligent. The background is also nice.What I like the most is the story's plot.Keep it up
This is a great novel, one of my favourites for sure. Sadly I can't give more stars on the updating stability xD, the author updates so much that you will need a LOT of fast passes to keep up with the updates
The story is (as the author frequently mentions) quite the cliche. However, I don't really mind that. An author doesn't have to reinvent the wheel to write an amazing story. Fuethermore, the "second-chance VRMMORPG" genre is one of my absolute favourites. With that said, I would like to start my review.The initial summary and the positive reviews made me incredibly excited. A gunslinger in a fantasy world? How fun and imaginative! Even though it's not 100% original, I don't mind it at all! The author might seem slightly too protective of his story and (honestly?) a bit scared of constructive critism, but, once again, I don't mind. However, even after 20 chapters, the novel still doesn't seem like a VR story. Quite frankly it's like the author cant bring himself/herself to decide whether to write a LitRPG or a "transported to a different world" novel. Even characters (NPCs) that are utterly pointless (and are literally AIs) are introduced with a whole lifestory attached to them. Why? What does this information contribute to the story? It is a game. Not a real world. However, honestly I wouldn't have minded this so-called 'game' if it wasnt for the excessive swearing. The protagonist is a 34 year old pro VR gamer yet even after reincarnating he acts and talks as if he is a child. How he (supposedly) controlled a guild with 5,000,000 players in it is utterly beyond me. I know it can be difficult to write in informal language. But just adding cursewords into sentences doesn't solve it.Oh yeah, and he is called "manco" (japanese for vagina). The former void assassin, super player, reincarnated guildmaster literally adopts the name pu**y in his quest for vengence...So yeah. In conclusion: I dropped it.
Even if you admit this is not your work doesn't mean its ok to steal someone translation without crediting it. Do you even have their permission? This is like you admitting you steal someone work and yet still stealing it without feeling guilty.