Worst story on a site with the worst and most boring hero you can find. I can list an infinite number of minuses, but after reading the work to the end, I did not find any pluses except for problems with the head of the author and the main character. I can’t imagine how you can specifically think of such a "correct" and stupid hero. The system is interesting, but that's all..
I find it interesting that the guy wasn't the usual oddball. he was reasonable and wasn't one to just act out. The story is really interesting starting in a new world. I like it!
Stumbled upon this amazing work ??welp here goes my review:The language and writing quality is okay but will be better with proofreading rechecking and editing. Over all the story is good but with more effort it can turn into a gem. A little polish is what we need ?good job author
I was curious because it has so many votes with power stones....WHAT A WASTE OF TIME!I regret reading as much as I did. I thought maybe it will get better since it has so good votes... NO!! Don't make the same mistake! Bad translation, bad characters, bad world building.... It's just bad. Read something else!DISAPPOINTING!!
The part with the gods ruinning with the wolves chasing him reminded me of that song wolves by marshMello and Selena Gomez, also i recommend listening to it. its a really good song imo “i been running with wolves to get to you”
It is a very interesting story. Especially the magic system is different and unusual. I like it very much. The story is written in third person, therefore we can read the stories and thoughts of all important characters. This makes the story more interesting. I am very excited to read more. Keep up the good work:)
Very good development! Very good development! Very good development! Very good development! Very good development! Very good development! Very good development!
As expected of Gaasuja, always knows how to deliver!Another great start to another potentially amazing book!Let's hope the execution is just as good!
Fantastic reading experience. I loved the mc specially. He is not weak and cry baby like others. He is a bit egoist and childlike but it's understandable because he is a gamer. I'm a gamer too so can relate xD So far it's going well. Hope you won't let me down friend. Thank you so much hahahah
all i will say is "its super duper good"
Writing QualityStability of UpdatesStory DevelopmentCharacter DesignWorld BackgroundThe total score5.0.....................................................
i was skeptical at first - but the first page alone had me hooked. has the makings of an epic. however it needs more female characters to be a classic