great story overall thought the detail is missing i have to fillllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll the 140 characters needed to post
A great story and its interesting so if you are interested read it if not do what you want. and just writing So i can do the review of 140 world
I really liked the concept behind the story overall and I think now I am addicted to this novel.The author of this novel Jashin just making a great job actually.I wonder what is going to happen in next chapters its giving me goosebumps in every chapters.Overall 5/5 stay tunned for next chapters :)
I absolutely love this book. it is amazing, entertaining, emotional, and thought provoking. I love the way it develops the main characters without neglecting the background and supporting characters! many books with romance tend to rush in but this book has a more realistic feel; slow, with one not quite sure how sure they're ready to go. some-parts absolutely broke my heart ie: Kits' baby getting deleted. speaking of which is she gonna try again with the new version of her husband? or not? anyway love this book. Author-chan, Keep up the good work!
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The story itself may be decent, but I can't tell, because the translation is absolute garbage. Definitely MTL tier.I also don't understand why so many authors feel the need to make the world of Pokémon edgy.
This is a good novel with a great plot. Although the MC is winey at the start after chapter 20 he turns cold. all in all great novel so far. Hope author doesn't ruin it by adding a harem as they just slow the plot down and are badly written
Enjoying the story so far. Just finished and caught up to chpt 418. Any idea when the next update will be??
Good, bookmarked. Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good Good.Btw baru tau lu nulis novel baru, semoga ga drop aja kek novel sebelumnya...
havent been on webnovel for a while and this was the first novel i decided to read after coming back and guess what?? its great!! though u probably figured that out if u read it.
I’v read the free chapters up till now and I got to say it’s good for an anime but not really for a novel. But all in all it’ pretty good with all the scenes and how he gives the systems to his sisters.
Its dropped but its a good book. i hope it’s picked up again