The writing quality is top tier, amazing grammar and simple to read writing style. But the chapters are a bit long, though if you put up with it you can really feel the main characters feelings towards his family and prison.
It's an okay novel. The story progression is fine but unfortunately is not immersive so we really don't get the tension that comes along or if we do it's very weak. The story is very simplistic in the sense there really isn't anything complicated nor are there any underlying things that make it more alive.
The characters are weak and the author should've spent more time building them up. He kind of just throws in characters and gives brief scenes of them just so we can get an idea of their personality. It's not very well fleshed out and their rather paper thin. The characters need fire in them or co-ops together so that we get a firmer idea of them. Even the mc feels like a piece of paper.
I believe if the author corrected these mistakes and gave more through in-depth detail of the events that happen with the mc then it would be better. Like don't go too fast over something but make it so that it's interesting. Especially make the characters interact more and have more events so we see more and more of them. If that's done then I genuinely believe this novel can be one of the best stories. For now though, it's disappointing to see the potential wasted
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Story is good but the way Author implement and narrate it is terrible every single character wants to kill MC god knows why
It is one of the most unique webnovels ive read in a long time, the characters have great depth to them and i hope the writer keeps it going, the world building is great
Racist as one can be in the later chapters. Do not read as it is disturbing. Im really dissapointed in the author, it is a shame that he turned out to be like this
I ve come from the author's discord, he asked to put a review with our honest thought and here I amI started the first chapters on scribblehub and when I ve seen him post on webnovel I created an account just to comment and give my opinion so he can improve the story lolThe beginning is good but there are still mistakes , except this the quality is not that bad and I like the plot .It s original, we don t see this kind of story often and for now it is a good start . Maybe the mc is thinking too much sometimes , asking too much questions but I guess in this situation we would all have many questionsgood novel so far , hopefully the next updates are as good as the 5 first chapters
Its fine i guessAlthpugh interesting thing is that hvisland is a connected word consisting of hvis and landHvis in danish meaning ifAnd land = land
Somewhat disliked the second harem member, because because she had played with other men besides her husband before meeting the MC, a bit stupid in my opinion the MC put her in the Harem System with women who easily cheated
Character Development? CheckSystem? CheckWorld Travel? CheckAction? CheckStrong Enemies? CheckPowerful cheats? CheckInheritances? CheckStrong Female Lead? Check
I, the great Siros had blessed you with a 5 star review.Be honored.............………….................................................................
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