My gosh it's been the longest time since I've been this intrigued with a story or an author enough to check out more than their 2 books. First star's ship which I have absolutely fell in love with, the whole alien stuff was incredibly exciting I wish it was longer. Then I have checked the other apocalypse story I have yet to finish I'm at 38th chapter but I'm glad I spent the coins on this one before that because this is just really interesting and exciting. On a more honest review your stories feels like it could have something more I don't know what exactly but maybe more subplots and I'm saying this as someone who only likes to get to the main story quickly but that is not really a problem either so I can't really point it out but I really love the part she met with Elizabeth and that whole horror stuff. Yeah I think I know what I was expecting from this story, it's horror scenes. not just killing someone or being killed by a zombie but a horror scene where it plays out like a game or something like that. For star's ship (read more than 200 chapters) I wished to see more on the alien culture like the njk and saalistaja were really interesting alien races in the story so I wish had more subplots on them so the story could drag on but then agian these are my selfish opinions as a reader so overall everything was to the point and fun in all the stories which was actually refreshing.
Your concept is really impressive! The ideas you’ve introduced are innovative and engaging, creating a solid foundation with great potential. Keep pushing forward with this direction—your hard work and creativity are definitely paying off. Looking forward to seeing how it continues to evolve!
The story is aptly named and the name speaks for itself.
I love camilla taking anything she wants without fear of anyone.The girl isn't weak and my own type of woman.Camilla should stand her ground and never waver.I am a very big fan of vampire series and stories.
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I’m liking the casualness of the writing and how simple everything is yet also detailed. It’s simple in a high quality kind of way. It’s not without its mistakes but it feels refreshing. It’s also not a completely original concept but it feels new in its own way. I deeply appreciate the thought you put into this as well. Nothing feels unnatural or inconsistent that I’ve noticed so far either. So while it’s not the best it could be yet I’m willing to grant a 5 star review because I believe it will be soon.
review for event. Story starts off strong with a good set up to show the basic state of MC in the world. I like the MC's attitude and am interested to see how the world changes into more of a magical one.
I came across this novel by chance under the discover section, and I must say it has been a pleasure.At times I'm hesitant when I see books ~100 chapters because I feel like the plots may not be as fleshed out as I would like at that time but this book does not fall in to that category.By the 100th chapter I felt so satisfied with with the journey thus far.The world building, the different POVs, the depth of the characters... everything comes together at times for complex moments where the author choreographs a rollercoaster of emotions for readers that build patiently and intensely without seeming out of place all the while showcasing the depth of personality and growth in the characters.Well done author
I really like your novel. I would like to request permission from you, the owner of this novel, to have this novel translated into my language or not.
Inconsistent names that mix with other names on the earlier chapters. There are names with inconsistent translation. Please stick with one translated name to prevent confusion.
I love the suspense, it has an amazing narrative. Infinity stars ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
overall story is good and FL character is good but you should focus on FL character and you should tone down the explaining. its like you are explaining from your point of you but you are trying to 3rd p.o.v