Good Read.Great Story, cool choices for powers.Love it, can't wait to read more................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Wow now that I know that is is stolen I will read it on another site. How pathetic to steal someone's work................................................
The novel is good, I highly recommend it to readers who are tired in reading fiction and system novels overall it is the best. .. .. .. ... ..
ALERT! Beta Mc and stupid MC!DO NOT READ THIS LEVEL IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO FEEL ANGER BECAUSE OF AN MC WITH BRAIN OF DINOSAUR.ALERT! Beta Mc and stupid MC!DO NOT READ THIS LEVEL IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO FEEL ANGER BECAUSE OF AN MC WITH BRAIN OF DINOSAUR.ALERT! Beta Mc and stupid MC!DO NOT READ THIS LEVEL IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO FEEL ANGER BECAUSE OF AN MC WITH BRAIN OF DINOSAUR.ALERT! Beta Mc and stupid MC!DO NOT READ THIS LEVEL IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO FEEL ANGER BECAUSE OF AN MC WITH BRAIN OF DINOSAUR.ALERT! Beta Mc and stupid MC!DO NOT READ THIS LEVEL IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO FEEL ANGER BECAUSE OF AN MC WITH BRAIN OF DINOSAUR.ALERT! Beta Mc and stupid MC!DO NOT READ THIS LEVEL IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO FEEL ANGER BECAUSE OF AN MC WITH BRAIN OF DINOSAUR.ALERT! Beta Mc and stupid MC!DO NOT READ THIS LEVEL IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO FEEL ANGER BECAUSE OF AN MC WITH BRAIN OF DINOSAUR.ALERT! Beta Mc and stupid MC!DO NOT READ THIS LEVEL IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO FEEL ANGER BECAUSE OF AN MC WITH BRAIN OF DINOSAUR.ALERT! Beta Mc and stupid MC!DO NOT READ THIS LEVEL IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO FEEL ANGER BECAUSE OF AN MC WITH BRAIN OF DINOSAUR.ALERT! Beta Mc and stupid MC!DO NOT READ THIS LEVEL IF YOU DO NOT WANT TO FEEL ANGER BECAUSE OF AN MC WITH BRAIN OF DINOSAUR.
An elaborate story set in two conjoined worlds, virtual and reality come together to form the backdrop for one of the best VR-novel stories on this Website. The usual overdone Reincarnation genre gets to relive its glory years through this story. All described and outfitted by tasteful grammar and a superb writing style.Now onto the meat of the review.For the last week I had been searching for a new VR-novel, since most of the ones I'm enthralled with and am waiting on updates for have been on hiatus or are currently way too slow with their updates. There's a long list of novels in this exact genre I've read but the ones that match up to this one aren't many. Notable ones are:-Phoenix Phire (Small hiatus should continue in a few weeks)-Rise of the Undead Legion (Very slow with updating)-Realm of Myths and Legends (Currently on hiatus)If you've read any of the above then this one is a must have on your reading list. Vice versa aswell. ---There's a lot to say for this novel and I'll try to keep it somewhat short, atleast for my standards. ---The world is as I mentioned before very elaborate more so because both 'worlds'(VR and Reality) get explored and explained, however there's no long info dumps to be found. Everything has it's time and place beyond the initial introduction which feels easy to grasp whilst reading. Never at one point did I get annoyed by exposition. Both worlds feel as if they are filled with life and adventures/interesting things. One thing I like about VR-novels among other things are the Game-Elements and they are described beautifully here, with the proper appearance. Author seemingly puts a lot of effort into making sure the numbers add up and can always be found in the chapter comments if anything is incorrect or mixed up. Overall I really like the world-building of this Novel and it feels alive. There's a few Side-Stories added in showing other people's perspectives which help in that regard.---Characters come alive and feel genuine. Their feelings can be experienced and are played with by the Author in a realistic way. The main character has multiple personalities which after reincarnating and progressing through the story alter and change in regards to what happens in a realistic way. I usually don't really like characters which are at the utmost top of the Dao of shamelessness as many readers have called it but I find it passable, plus he doesn't use it a lot.I feel like the interactions between Qion Qi(Think I'm writing this wrong ฅ^•ﻌ•^ฅ) are somewhat 'too' silly sometimes. There's only so many fart jokes which I can personally enjoy before that gets old, sometimes I wish he could just be the bad ass lion sidekick I imagine him to be instead of the comedic relief of the story. Even without him farting and such there's enough humor in the Novel to get around.Author in the beginning got a lot of shit for the Female main character which I don't think he deserves. Admittedly I've come in after all the changes were made so I don't know exactly how the story was before but as it stands now I've never hated or disliked her. I actually like her drive and motivation, backstory and how she treats the people around her. I think she's well written. MC's guild is filled with fleshed out and loveable characters which I like reading Side-Stories about, aswell as interactions between them and the MC. His various love interests are the same, filled with different realistic emotions which keep them feeling alive. They add a lot to the story and I like that there's a few chapters worth of stories inbetween Arcs filled with conversations and interaction between them all.---Writing is superb and is easy to understand and get through, the reading experience is delightful. The editor(Devil's Advocate) does his job great aswell.Anyways I need to cut it off here, can only have so much in a review, one day I'll get better at that.Thanks for writing Author (◍•ᴗ•◍)✧*。
Updated fine but the novel was horrible. The author coddled the MC so much that I never seen him struggle even once so far. First time it made sense to be saved from a disaster with 0,0001% survival rate, cause he needed to be super lucky to be an MC. Then it started.."I'm useless" - copied someone's sword technique."My house is ruined" - a man build him a new one with 1 more floor."Birds chased me" - made a distress call and can go back after sleeping in a hotel."Ah I can die any moment now cause I'm born unlucky" - a girl out of nowhere healed his one true flaw (that made him unique btw)."Oh my god, some boss will attack us please hear me out" - upper level guy trusted him so much, he gave the no ranking MC a team to lead."Wah I'm attacked!" - an explosion card came to his rescue killing everything within 10k radius (I already bored ny this point so I don't know if the radius is true or not, it's big. That's all it matters. I don't really care no more)."Hot examiner almost died because of me" - the girl who healed him came again and helped him.I stopped at that point. No more.He's not OP but he's a baby. He can't do anything. Always been fed by his mommy (the author). MC wanted to eat, author will chew and spat the food for him. MC wanted to poop, author will open MC's butthole for him. That's how bad this novel was.
The stakes in these chapters are absolutely climbing and I am not okay. Let's map this out because it's layered in the best way. On the personal level: Bai Jinshu is trying to escape a toxic marriage while being trapped in a house full of enemies. Liu Xiangyun just confessed to faking a pregnancy to frame her, but Ao Jing is still furious at HER. The divorce document isn't secured yet. She's one step away from freedom and a million steps away from safety. On the political level: The Emperor Emeritus—the man who presumably built this entire dynasty—is dying from poison. That means someone in the inner circle is trying to kill the founder of the state. The Imperial Physicians have given up. The Emperor Jiaqing is grieving but also clearly calculating. And then there's Zongzheng Ling, a non-imperial prince with real power, who walks in and immediately challenges everyone's authority. The genius of this conflict structure is that all three levels are connected. If Bai Jinshu saves the Emperor Emeritus, she gains political capital. If she fails, she dies. If she succeeds without permission, she might die anyway. Ao Jing is actively working against her at every turn, grabbing her wrist, calling her malicious, trying to pull her away from the bed where she's about to administer the cure. And then there's the mystery layer—who poisoned the Emperor Emeritus? Why did Zongzheng Ling look like a demonic monster the night before? What's his relationship with Bai Jinshu? The author is stacking conflicts on top of conflicts and I cannot look away. The scene where Bai Jinshu confirms the poisoning through pulse-reading while pretending to comfort the Imperial Noble Consort? That's suspense at its finest. She's one move away from saving a life and one move away from being caught. Ao Jing's hand on her wrist at that exact moment—chills. Absolute chills.
Ara didn't like anyone touching her, but when he asked if he could touch her she said freaking yes!
Kinda boring - started off with promise - very slow -
Great book I'm going to read the next one
It was a well written book that was interesting and detailed without being too much
Great book