Review as of chapter 42: Its the classical "reborn as the villain in the story" but its pretty well done. The Mc is thoughtfull and clever but the "theoretical mc" has a lot of karma on his side. Lets hope they take it out of trial eventually.
It's an interesting concept and I would like to see a novel like this, but the way it's written is terrible. I hate the loose plot progression and the way the characters interact with the MC. In short, this is something you only read if you're not looking at anything other than the MC getting women to sleep with him and showing off while not leaving his house unless it's to save someone. It's honestly hurting my intelligence even though I'm only 19 chapters in. Just some examples of what makes my brain hurt reading this. The MC starts dating his neighbor, who he rarely talked to on the day he got the system. She literally has no reason for liking him, other than his looks. She even acknowledged that he didn't go out much at all other than to go to work and rarely interacted with others.He also sleeps with the reporter he literally just meets just because he's handsome despite just getting a girlfriend 2 days ago.He also used magic like it's normal in front of people, and even decided to advertise it without thinking of the trouble it's going to cause him. All because he thought more people are going to ask him to leave his house so he can refuse them to get more points for the system's store.It's just really dumb to me how he isn't keeping a low profile at this stage in the novel, and I understand it's to progress the plot but it's so sloppy in my opinion.
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this is an amazing novel..I love how it just flows ...excellent ??????????????????????????????????????
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You really need to work your focus. Dont jump around so suddenly and explain about other thing in the midst of something. Man, i skipped most of the chapter when you suddenly explaining about those unrelated people like when you explain about the background of a shopkeeper. I mean who care about what happened with the shopkeeper or story of some spirits who take about 2 or more chapter and then disappear into the coffin. Cmon work your focus and do the plot properly, 60 chapter wasted without proper introduction and you want to go premium? Really? What are you supposed to feed your reader? Info dump?
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I don't really write reviews(since I don't really know how to write one )but since I like this story and I wanna let the author know that there are people who always check if there is a chapter update(i'm one of them) I'mma just write it anyways. First thing I wanna say is about the title, which majority of the people question about, which in my opinion there's really nothing you have to worry about. Ok going into the story, I think the author did a great job, for instance I really like the character development of the mc and how he writes the fight scenes(very well written in my opinion),the training and the interaction between the mc and other characters. For the chapters that I've read so far, it was good.But now I just wanna binge read the chapters where the mc takes revenge(I would really love it if the author could bring out more chapters on a daily basis but than again I don't wanna rush him for quantity over quality). So what I want to say is give this story a chance/try and you might find yourself staying till the end,(which is probably not ending anytime soon) like me. I came for the cover of the book but stayed because of the story which the author clearly had put effort into.
a nice novel with an amazing story! Completly recommanded to read.
I like it that MC is fierce and doesn't sit back and let others dictate his life to him. I also like how creative the writer is in regards to the superhero plot. Travis certainly is an interesting character, who I would love to see level up from weak to strong. Okay flow of writing and chapters are understandable, only wish there were more than three chapters. Good job Author-san. A good read that I highly recommend to all WN readers.
Review as of chapter 93, no spoilersFirst of all, I can't tell anything about the updating stability yet, as I binged all 93 chapters. ?I started this novel for the sm*t, but got hooked by the story, world building and it's charakters.If you like magic theory and an intelligent MC, then this novel is for you!One of the best things is: the system does not feel annoying like in some other novels where every single action HAS to do something with it! It rather blends into the story and world in a wonderful way :)Have fun reading! ??
This one is really enjoyable,the horror genre here is f*cking bull****, its supernatural.not an ounce of horror could be found, MC is reincarnated to his enemy body who actually the cause of his dead because of his jealousy toward him since his wife was loving him deeply.anyway the story is really enjoyable you guys should read this, very recommended and if you want to compare this to house of horror.both book has completely different styleAs for the title of the book that said Midnight bookstore, after reading for 60 chapter i could only say, this title didnt do justice to this book!