A lovely and smooth-flowing read with no clichés, well, except for reincarnation. The story is stable, the magic theories are well thought out, and the protagonist is growing up fine. Most importantly, there are no arrogant young masters (at least for now).My only complain is the shortage of chapters. How can 39 chapters satisfy me? At least 150 chapters are needed for a mouthful in one setting!
Please avoid this, it pains my heart: "It was time for Wang Xue I mean Bai Xia...""him/her" decide"*the following 659 words were exempted*" I would rather a more formal novel, but do I get there are few options"A martial soul appeared, but somehow it was different? (People: WELL NO SH*T IT IS)" again formality, both in the sentence and the parentheses"QI" capitals pls (qidian international)"I'm sorry. I forgot about Grammarly-san to edit this and correct some stuff and now she's lonely. Sorry *bows down* Hmmm, do I release TSASS chapter now or later >:D" pls pls author notePlease avoid hypocrisy, it ruins a story (not that you are doing this)good base, develop it wellif you want an editor yeah i can do someThank youquality not badstability idek so 4development hasnt happeneddesign um yeahworld so far good but 5 is perfect so yeah
Woah......time travel , my all time favourite. I always love a good time travel story . I would love to see how things play out for him . Can't wait for more chapters to be out . You have my support ?
The book is quite good and funny ? ? ?, I would love to read more. I'm currently at chapter 11 and honestly loving it, can't wait for more books like this. This is pure innovation ?!
Summary sounds interesting, hopefully it's is interesting and not just a copy and paste rip off story....??????????????????
I haven't read all the chapters yet but this story is defenitly interesting and would recommend it from what I have read so far but I know nothing about the what I haven't read.
Very similar to night ranger. Characters aren't always the best but it makes up for it with great action and pretty good world design. Other thing that I love is that it has a d&d based leveling system. Overall pretty good.
Very Good. Very fast.Ich Like it.Better Lovestory than Twilight.I Wish WE could work together DiceVR.The best beginning of everytime.I Love it.You are a god in writing.Please teach me master DiceVR.In LoveXoxo
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I would like to say that you are looking for comedy, cultivation, lots of events, and a MC that makes you to shake them and laugh at them, then this is the novel.The chapter starts off with a chase and you already get the idea of what is happening off the bat.I enjoy reading about Lee Tao cause Author writes him in an entertaining comedic way!Keep it up Author!!
I hope I'm not annoying you with my questions.Is everything fine with you author?As one of your loyal fans I really admire the work done in this novel so I'm always longing for new chapters as many others of your fans.When can we expect the return of the story?Hope you do fine :) .Sorry if I'm annoying you.PS: (No ill intentions in my messages and I'm sorry for my bad English)
It's sad seeing such great story end up being left in the dust. This story already has great translator and good release rate but was put on hiatus because of some nonsense reason. Fuck Qidian and their ****ty event. They only care about how to sell more spirit stone. Bring back the translator so we can regular update again.