If you love fast-paced stories, this one can be interesting to read. And the concept of transporting into another world, when you think it's just a game, is very intriguing.
Best and hardest story to make a fanfic but author u done it and it is also good but you are misnaming some character (mc of your story and real story) and what timeline this story occurs??and where is (real story MC's) senior brother and junior sister??? . Finally waiting for fast chapters to read ?
broo this is just godly, really amazing man, I hope you don't drop this!!!! Though I do hope that Lu Chen ends up with meixiu!! I just really like her.
i haven't read the book yet but ill give it 5 star hoping it will be good as armipotent also looking forward later ill change my review if good or not.
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Love it . . . .
a great story can come of this but you will need grammar corrections and an expansion on the story I would recommend that you do not drop this story as it can become a huge hit if reworked
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I really liked how I wrote each word. I have dedicated a lot to this work.On the other hand, it is an original novel without copies or inspiration in others. This was all part of a dream I had.
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This book is so far more than fantastic. Really interesting concept and the way the book is written is great and well readable. I can't wait for other chapters to kick in. Looking forward to continuing to read this book.
Really an ok novel to pass the time. Though I don't like the MC at all. MC has no idea what his power is, also MC will forget the simplest of things. The MC try's to hide the fact he can see ghosts why? There isn't many chapters an the update rate is horrible. The only good thing about the MC is he has no family an lives alone.