It was an overall ok novel from what i read, i just got annoyed at how everything he seemed to do seemed to force an advancement in the overall plot, most things shouldn't effect everyone else, he makes loads of really stupid decisions which he doesn't seem to lean from which annoys me, and half of each chapter just seems to be him bitching and complaining about one thing or another, i skipped in 5 chapters hoping it would improve, but it seemed he still complains so i'm dropping the book
Overall a very good read i hope it gets selected soon.
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I like the book so far. It's got an interesting premise, and the author knows what he's doing. They have written some great books so I'm sure this one will be good too.
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This is not the type of book I would generally be reading. Nonetheless, this started out really well, and the current amount of chapters is not sufficient to leave a proper review. The grammar requires correction at parts. Good luck!
Personal review from the author.It is rather subjective as it is my own novel, but I won't make things up regarding what I would feel from the prospective of a reader.First and foremost the writing quality. It's not that good but still readable. Ifind that overall the sentences make sense and their structure is fine.There are minor mistakes here and there, therefore i cannot give four stars and since the writing isn't spectacular neither five.Then the story developement. I think It's pretty intriguing, I quite like the fights too.But there are some parts that seems rather random and not planned beforehand.Personally I really like the MC. It may be because I'm the author, but I think he is quite cool. It's a bit shameless but it's my opinion. Thus i gave 5 starts on the character.The updating stability is pretty random, but new chapters will come sooner or later. Thus I gave three stars.About the world background, I personally like the variety of scenarios presented in the novel.
I have been following the story when it only had fifty chapter and had seen the writing style of the author evolving as well as the character development. The starting part of the story is little rush but it's gets better with each character.It has been a great story and look forward to what is going to happen next in great magic world.Keep of the good work and release faster if possible.
The author/translator is a tool. Contsantly adding junk to the chapters for word count. Dropped the story midway and started a second story. I barely made it past chapter 60 before getting fed up. Thankfully I wasted nothing but time due to the free 24 hour bonus.Do not waste your time with this person or thier works.
Not enough reviews for a rating... so i'll rate.Writing quality: No mistakes seen so far. The use of ancient chinese in the story throws me off at times simply because i forget and too lazy to check the aux chap. (Author has explained the meanings in a chap)Updates: The updates are stable. It's just not updated enough if you ask me. I want more but i don't want the quality to drop because of it. So i'll be content.Story: There is a lot of development and early on it might have been a bit annoying. (Cliffhanger on ML and the next week the chap is about FL so 2 weeks before we get back to ML) I hope that at the latest chap (of the time of this review) There wil not be too many shifts again.Char: They are well enough designed and interesting.Background: Everything is good.
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