The grammar is perfect so you don't have to worry about loses brain cells. The world building and characters are also really good; the MC's connection to the world he gets put in and how its handled makes everything more interesting. Not only is the story good but the author pumps out chapters like crazy and that enthusiasm is pretty good for writing a story, as it can be pretty easy to lose motivation if something comes up.
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its a really good story but the editing is awful. I got to around chapter 400 before I gave up because the grammar, punctuation, and general flow were so bad. its a shame:(
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If you like dual cultivation novels then look no further and give this a try. Writing quality is fine (I didn't find any mistakes with my meager ability) and the plot even though some what generic is interesting. Unfortunately I found the story too early and now I have to wait for more chapters!!!!!
its goodMC has strong backgroundMC is not so op that he can defeat an elder of sectcharacters are not idiotthe reason i rate it is because its good
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Terrible writing, awful story, childish characters, absurb story flow, ridiclous plot holes. 100% trash, don't read it. The MC is your average high school boy that all of sudden become top class hit man able to kill a small group of gang around 20 members eventhough he is never have any training or knowledge about any weapons whatsoever yet he can use any weapons like expert.The MC is high school student and yet he got blush and emotional over holding hand with a female classmate like 11 years old will do.There is no explanation whatsoever about the app itself like how it able to have all sort of OP features, so overall it feel so absurb and rushed.Everyone seem so indifferent toward killing someone else as if it is a game eventhough it already state as being the real world.There is world building at all, the enemies are also one dimensional goons while some are merely to add the words count so overall nothing matter.All in all, don't read this trash.
Amazing... I definitely want to read more...so far it's only four chapters but those chapters are some of the most thrilling ones I've read about... I have to say I'm hooked on this story... I really want to read more on this bookThe MC looks really interesting and I can't wait to read more on his future escapades... I really like these morally grey types of MC's, not the perfect Gary Stu's or the clichéd villains... I can't wait to see what he will do nextIn my opinion this book is by far the best pick out of the other nine ones and it should really be picked
What a better time to review smth on the new year completely wasted Anyway time to real review xDUpdate stability: 5 the author even post too much in my opinion hahaWriting quality: 5 I spotted some mistakes I think but I don't mind themStory quality: 5 So far so good Character design: 4 A little lacking but it is just the beginning of the story so lots of room to improve World background: 4 Modern world + Apocalypse world based on real life location so nothing new but still left something to imagination To finish I wish everyone a happy New year
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