HI author❤Great work by you, even the synopsis, looks suspicious, haaa I love everything about your book, even tho not too many chapters yet but still I'm loving It, the plot is just outstanding, I love Alexander's character! he is really suspicious??
5 Stars!!! It's basically Overlord but with a WW2 theme. There are some sections that are in spanish and have a lot of text gibberish. But a part from that it's a ok story!
As a courtesy I'm just going to post 3 stars since I haven't actually read the story.I'm just here to ask why do you use a summary that reads like something from fanfiction.net?Your summary provides conflicting ideas and vastly untenable scope of dramatism. It would've been better to emphasise how special she could be while implying mysteriously that there's a reason to her state of affairs, alluding to a fight of galactic proportions.Well, that's just how I would do it anyways.
I never try to write anything like this but for this story, I have to. My first thought was how far it could move me. When I read the first chapter, I just blinked and nodded. Alright. Not that bad. But when I finished the chapter Neo-Genesis. I wept tears. Yes, this man did cry. I was surprised that the author has a way to tell the story. If this novel were a man, he would have a high IQ and EQ because the storyteller is smart and smart to move this reader to feel like the characters. I like most of everything, plot, characters, the warmth of this family, and some little hints that the author already put in at the beginning. What I like the most is ‘less is more.’ The narration is not overdramatic. The author just tells his story and uses surrounding tools to show details which is simple but ‘deep’. Great job. Undisclosure is one of a few fictions I read on my smartphone and did not check how long the chapter is. I read it smoothly. There are some holes, for example, POV, the unnatural conversation. Or the writing of some scenes is not powerful enough to build emotions. But it’s just a little thing that I can overlook. I recommend it. This story should deserve more views.
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The MC’s personality is just the worse as he is basically lin fan but just downgraded the only kind of likeable person is the girl he recruited into his sect and if my prediction is right he will most likely have a harem of female desiples.
There are much better apocalypse and survival stories in this platform. The characters in this one (especially MC) are just too stupid to digest. It's a generic and bland zombie story with subpar planning and descriptions that defy logic. By chapter 13, I could no longer bring myself to continue.
I lIke it, im intrested in what your going to when the season ends Also is the virus glong to spread around the world??
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I honestly have a heart for this kind of stories. The first chapter was already intense, the second hits the emotion, and the story's progress is amazing. A story full of action, yes! Character depth, yes! There's a few punctuation errors, but overall, it has the potential! :)
The book was great the intro and prologue really captivated my attention. your writing was unique so keep writing!! so hats off to our talented author - the reader!