Great story but author need to edit and improve grammer. Need more chaptersneed more chaptersneed more chaptersneed more chaptersneed more chapters
I don’t know why these type of novels get chosen how can anyone expect that this will be good novel going forward, there is just blatant faceslapping nothing else mc just recieves companies aytime for faceslapping, after reading 30 chapters i don’t think that they will even keep on updating this novel and maybe will just drop it later as it should be.
Request for raw. Need it to feel the power to read nice things. Lately I feel that the novels I read are very uninteresting so I need to feel empowered.
No just No, when I read this it felt so bad to the point i would re-read the most boring book in the world than read this is he so dumb to the point where hes going to be a test subject or killed. I wouldnrsther trust a 5yr kid then him with a secret than thr MC,like who tells the family "oh im going to be really strong out of know where when I dont have no powers anx im really lazy , oh yes thats not wierd at all ok son thats good to know" like really in almost spit out my drink for reading that. *this is just an opinion also the total rating is 1/5
Story so far has been really good, looking forward to when it's fully released. More chapters pls More chapters pls More chapters pls More chapters pls
Landing a review after reading chapter 92. Looos like i was right to endure the beginning. The author did say the beginning was going to be trash, so i took his word and clutched through them. But when it did get around the middle it started being interesting, the beginning was hella interesting as well but the execution lacked. Butal as the story went on, it started increasing and increasing and right now i was on the edge of my seat as i read you latest 5 chapters. How the well did you start writing like that?? Like seriously the writing is vwry good when i read the latest chapter. I won't be like others and give you a chance. Please update the beginning with the same level of writing you are writing now and show them what you can do. This really has potential to be one of the best. I believe in you writer. Hope you find your rhythm and good luck for the exams. Dont putntoo much pressure on yourself because of these idiots not able to go through the entire book, they'll return once you actually start editing..You can start doing that in your free time or when your exams are over. We do want our writer to pass after all???. Whatever Loved your book and am waiting for more.
An excellent novel with a superb plot and top quality writing.In addition, updates are regular.There is nothing else to say. The novel fully deserves these 5 stars.
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The story started off strong, and snagged my attention from the beginning . The pacing and the quality of this novel are also pretty good. The first couple of chapters reveal why the mc has his nickname “ The Martial Arts King”. Everything from the action scenes, to the various environments are described in depth(which allows my imagination to soar). Another thing I noticed was that the side characters introduced, threw me through a loop. They acted differently than what I was expecting, and I really enjoyed that. I’m excited to see how the Celestial Fist Tournament plays out.
From chapter 100 onward it switches from a decent translator to machine translation and becomes a garbage mangled mess, bit of a shame as I was quite liking it until that point. I just can't rate mtl as anything higher than 1 star, it gives me a headache to even try reading it
Ngl I’m gay for this author my doors are open anytime please release moreeeee??
The book is intriguing primarily because of the villainous trait of the main character. Not too thrilled about the beginning but deciding to give the future chapters a chance didn't disappoint. Everyone's happy cuz there's no romance, geez. This part ticked me off at first. Okay, I'm a fan of romance but I noticed that with the present storyline, including romance would ruin everything. Where would you even add it? It would only give Mike a weakness and I'm pretty sure that's the last thing ve needs right now. However, I expect less robotic side characters. World building is excellent but what brought down the ratings from 5.0 is the lacking character design and unstable writing quality. Poor at the beginning but gets better as the story progresses.