I loved this story really the only complaint I could possibly have is I feel like it needs to be proof read one more time for small typos other than that I hope there is a sequel
Omg omg omg.. first one that I have felt that it warranted a review!! Please add more chapters!!! This cant be the end! It's just the beginning!! Please!!!
Pretty good so far. I’ve never been a fan of the isekai fan but this is still good spin on the concept. For the most part it’s been pretty interesting and hopefully it continues to be interesting.
tried really hard to make it past the first chapter. really, I did. the grammar made my eyes bleed and bled, due to inability to stick to present or past tense, and the blonde man with the katana and many wives made me cringe so hard that my father felt it.along with mc's inability to draw even the simplest only conclusions and the never ending train if tropes running their own train on my eyes, I couldn't make it.OP, please download grammar.ly or MS word with spell check, please. your product would be infinitely better even without proof reading.
I honestly don't know where to start, I would like to start by saying I had low expectations for this novel but god damn was I surprised.Everything about this is just amazing, the world, the characters, the events that happen and even the MC. This is so good that i'm checking for a chapter update every 2 hours, im addicted!
Very nice I like it for a Novice novelist its amazing....................................................................................................................................
I enjoyed reading these few chapters!! I hope that the author will continue with this story. Thank you for the good work and enjoyable story.
I enjoy the unique twist on the reincarnation genre that this novel does. The MC reincarnates as a white lotus and I find the evolution ability she has to be very interesting. Unlike many reincarnation novels, the main character reincarnates to a time after her death. I find that most reincarnation-revenge story brings the MC to a point before they had died and they use their past life (now future) knowledge to accomplish their revenge. What I like about this novel is that the MC does not know who her real enemy is exactly nor does she know their motive. This creates a sense of mystery that makes me wish the author can do a mass release. It is truly a shame that the author is human with a real life and things to do and not a robot.
There is nothing wrong with the novel so far the mc is not exposing his cultivation to his sect and anyone he know its a light read so far the author is not so deep in devolping Characters and world background
infiltrate dream system,,,1st tame my idol as f3ck slave2nd torture chaebol to be wallet shuttle3rd hit&run guerilla tacticbwahaha bwohoho
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