NemesisWriter
Came here because of the forced library. Cant even remove this boring novel which I didnt and don’t have to read. Knowing this Autor that diasapointed with divinity and inhuman that was full with filler and destroying expectations with rise of the… book.
Wow, the story is intriguing, although it is only the beginning, I am already drawn to reading it.Looking for a little adventure you should read it.
Cardboard world and characters. Lots of inconsistencies and omissions. Everything seems to play along with the main character. The protagonist is not distinguished by intelligence and ingenuity, his victory in battle is known from the very beginning. The plot is short and very straightforward.
By far the best novel of the last few cycles.Synopsis sounds generic, but the execution is very well done. Other then eternal life (lifespan, can still die) he has no other cheats. Therefore he has to use his wits (the author uses his wits) to actually win out.
The trial reads of this week are not good...................................................................................................
THERE ARE SOME SPOILERS. Nothing major just about how the mc acts and some reasons explaining the points of why I am wanting to drop. (Hopefully the author can clear some of it up?)The two major problems for me that stand out above everything else, that is making me want to drop are, When does he stop becoming a slave to his "uncle"? I just cbf to waste any more time on this if doesn't stop soon. I mean he should already have his doubts about him already. From all his supposed intelligence the mc was shown to have during the earlier chapters, it's baffling how he doesn't have some doubts. His town was supposedly killed by beasts but he is magically the only one still alive? He doesn't remember anything but when he does or tries to it is painful?He should have had his doubts in his "uncle" considering these facts but still believe in him considering all the time they spent together. However, it should have become frighteningly clear that something is wrong after speaking to Lan. Let's not forget what he called the uncle and even hinted at why. But the most important thing is he learnt about the soul/mental technique. He can make someone kill themselves, take their memories etc. This should have made it glaringly obvious and confirmed his doubts about something about his uncle is wrong. He should know that if he can do it, what is stopping an even stronger person doing it to him? Or is he so fcking arrogant to ignore this? He should have realised that his supposed memory loss is because of a soul/mental technique. Then adding on all the other clues he has been given then he should rly be starting to doubt his "uncle" and start realising some of the truth... However, it's like let's just ignore all that and keep the mc as a dog/slave/pet of the uncle. Make the mc seeth with rage everyone says something to discredit his master and be a good little pet and make him proud...I honestly can't stand it and rly want the author to just get on with it. The whole memory, adding on with all these clues should have acc lead to something. Another thing is the whole rage thing... I liked his other personality better. Where he didn't care about what others thought. Ignored them and only went after people who are directly after him. Now lately it's just been the mc acting like a fcking madman for no reason. I'm guessing it's because of the scripture or his special body that is giving him the rage. It was mentioned it was half the rage and the other half was him the calm side so maybe he has a beast side? However, how long does this last, when or does he reach a balance? I don't want to read about a psychopath madman that just wants to kill everything... compared to his first personality its a difference between night and day. I dunno just cbf to read about an mc losing control constantly going on a rampage every time he fights... plus it always starts or ends with the mc always smiling EVERY SINGLE TIME. Like we get it he is crazy. Do you have to mention the smile that everyone notices but him every time he fights or about to battle??But yeah, prefer the mc having some intelligence like it was made out he had but in reality, he doesn't... Yeah, anyway gl to Author
I like how the plot is going so far I am looking forward to future chapters.Thank you for creating a villian solo character it has surprised pleasantly with how you are writing the plot thank you.
One of the best out here.This novel really is a hidden gem. There aren’t many novels with characters as complex and well written like this one.Give it a try and you probably won’t regret
Read 7 chapters. For someone who dies because of wishing to see his sister, she hadn't been mentioned once in his thoughts. Quote: "He usually would not go this route because it led through an enemy gang's turf but his desire to see his sister clouded his judgement. ""He knew it was wrong but it was the only way he could keep his family fed and it offered a semblance of protection in their violence filled neighborhood."It would seem that the MC turned into "What past? I have no past." This basically made the beginning pointless. The novel might as well have started with the demons right away. Because the cornerstones of what made MC at the beginning, him valuing family and bearing responsibility, are jettisoned right after, turning him into an empty state character who, as he quips after the fact he is leveling his following skill.Quote: "Azemo kept leveling his only skill as he silently followed Zaebos, he would probably be a max level follower in no time."Also, quote: "We summoned you eight to become generals in the war against humanity. "After hearing the demon say, that MC will have to kill his mom and sister since they are humans, his next shown thought is... Quote: "'This room is really cozy.' "Yeah, zero reaction. MC is an empty puppet. Which makes demons in return hollow shells. Demons against Humans are morality war between good and evil. There can't be good or evil if the MC is an empty shell of a character who simply reacts after hearing all this. "'This room is really cozy.' ".......Well, at least the grammar here is fine and well written in places. The sentences flow smoothly. Which actually just dragged me down more. Empty shell MC is usually found in authors with poor grammar and jumpy sentences that are smooth as sandpaper.In the end I feel disappointed.
First this story has already 100 plus chapters which is a great way for binge reading. The story plot is interesting. The narratives are easy to read and can be perceived well by the readers. The world background is written well.Overall, this book is a great read!Great work author!
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This is good novel. I liked it. The author has put too much efforts in this novel. I'll appreciate this novel heartly. Make sure to update new chapters regularly ??.. . I'll surely recommend this novel.keep it up ??
