Very interesting story with enjoyable scene, I love how you are smooth in your description which Carry's the readers along. Keep it up and more update too
Love characters awaiting their kids grow up Together they family are so lovely ?
The author has done an excellent job of describing key details and capturing the protagonist’s struggles. This is a highly engaging and well-crafted work—highly recommended!
I can't get past the grammer issues and repetitive sentences. Multiple paragraphs in the same chapter contradict themselves. The story may have had potential, but I can't continue this to find out.
I just got done reading the new chapter and it made me thing of this!!! I really love this book and hope it keeps going for a really really long tome!!! I would have hoped that the MC got at least 5-10 or more dragon egg if not more from this dragon so she can Frist of all make contracts with them all to be her familiars and then to let them grown up and have the MC train them and when I say train them.... I mean train them to protect her family and to fight in battles... Like let them have armor on them especially in battles so they can help keep the Small fries off the MC and they can alway be watching over her daughters and wifes and they can always be around just incase they r in trouble!!! By the MC having so maybe dragons they will be able to have squads of 5 and take turns roaming around her property to make sure her family is safe and no threat to coming towards her house or land.... Like 1 squad flys around and make sure everything is secure and safe and everything for half the day then the other five take over and do the exact same thing the first five did!!! And with so many dragons under the MCs command the dragons she has can control the other dragons and wyverns and make them fall into line and the MC should be able to get the 5-10 or more dragons she made contracts with something out of the system to help them be bigger and stronger so this way no other dragon can fight them off or dominate them and id there r dragons that dont want to fall into place then have the MC go there and beat the holy hell out of them so they understand they r not the biggest and baddest anymore and they r not as strong as they think they r and even let the MC get the skill from the system so dragons can adjust their size so this way they can stay small and always be around the MC and the house fly around her send be on her shoulder or in the backyard or something and they wouldn't be that noticeable unlike there full sizes!!! And honestly the MC should look for the most ferocious beast on land so if the dragons r having a problem in getting into small places or r getting attacked from the air then they have the graound beast to help out!!!! I hope this happens when they go back to there home and even have a couple beasts or something where they r now roam her property when she is away to protect her wifes and daughters!!!! I really really hope u the author put this in the book!!!!
this is really good. Recommended to men of culture. night phantom should add dark in the tags everything else is good
bro do transmigration intead of birthing a new body it s disgusting :( hope you can adjust next time.
Someone from behind the stage appeared.
"Oh thats sound interesting," said me casually.
Welf: Yo bell it still in the morning but you got really excited don't you.
' neo ileum-i mwoni? ' : 'what's your name ?'-JIMIN
Fed to the rules and I hit the ground running