Reading your book is like a trip I am willing to take once,twice and again. The development of the story from the initial chapter is absolutely beautiful and I can't wait to read more. Guy is a character with a promising feats. I love the updating stability.
YOU WOULD DEFINITELY REGRET IT IF YOU DON'T READ THIS!!! The writing style is superb, for stability of updates..well I just came here this morning sooo idk but I think it was 4chp/week (?). It hasn't developed yet but there's too much OPness!! The author is building the pillars for development by introducing the mc through other character's perspective which I think is nice. And as you know the synopsis was shouting "THIS IS GOING TO BE HAREM!!". welp, I don't really like harem bcz I've read too much of it but this story doesn't jump straight to that genre. This is worth the read!! While I'm here, I'll be advertising myself please read "Unspoken Words" lmao
The author please spoil me with what is the plan of angels, I have a feeling that the author has dropped this. I just need to know why they need the mc in their plan
1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read it wrong also4. You checked5. You smiled7. You are wondering why you still reading this8. You see the mistake right? (on7)10. But did you see I skipped number 6?10. You checked11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 913. And did you see I skipped number 214. You got tricked15. But did you see that I skipped number 1216. You checked and wandered why am I wasting my time on this.( You got tricked )
This is really nice and it is very explanatory this might be what I need to start writing.I believe this is the right for beginners to get started
Bro I love this kind of novel... I want novels with same concept plzzzz @#@##@##@########2#####1###$@###$_##$$@#$#@#$$#$$########33#######3###
this is a nice novel hope you do a good job for the progress of writing the next parts , again thank you so much for writing this great novel, hope your safe aswell from ncov virus take care always
Awesome! The story is hilarious.?The writing allows us to create a vivid image about the main characters and their personality. The change seen over the first 40 chapters is nice to see as well. 5/5? ??
It's actually relatively good, as trial reads go. Be warned however: large portions of this novel will be nonsensical or unsuited to other parts of the novel. Examples include the nonsense that is his only attack skill, the fact that literally nothing he does costs any resource, his obsession with equipment over skills, the general lack of sense with stats, and the entire setup surrounding those stupid "death soldiers". This is not the author's fault, but rather the fault of the transcriber, who has changed major portions of this story and added random stuff in to pad out the differences in order to avoid copyright infringement while copy pasting almost literally everything else without regard to whether it makes sense to leave it that way. In the original story the MC actually does have an SSS talent which removes resource costs, is a mage who can fuse skills together, and doesn't even posess a system at all much less a horde of soldiers to murder his enemies for him. A lot of scenes will make much more sense if you keep in mind that the original author didn't have him as an invincible tank with an army.
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Does this book have a sequel or something? I can’t find it
At first I was pleasantly surprised by how alright this was. The MC is not a mega douche crippling dantians or watever they do nowadays, nor is he a little pussy. He's just a very smart dude who actually has empathy and conviction (ikr, that's impossible).Then I realised the author is atrocious at story writing. How do I explain this...Since it's a reincarnation type of novel, of course he has a life before moving on and the author makes this section quite dramatic before actually getting onto the story (through it establishes character so it's ok)Then holy moly does the author go on literary diarrhoea repeating the name of the training manual "[Muscle Tendon Bone Elongation .... Super Amazing Technique]" (I skipped a bunch of words cos who tf can remember this man) trying to get the wordcount high enough. After some point he stops. I was thinking of strangling the translator for making me read this garbage but then I realised you shouldn't shoot the messenger lol.Other than that, the author seems to think that going on paragraphs upon paragraphs of tangents about the most uninteresting things actually substitutes for a good reading. You can skim these parts tbh.The rest of the reading is made up of actual story development. You follow with the character and most of the decisions he makes, and the way he goes about them, are indeed quite satisfying and not entirely unbelievable.Overall, ok novel to read but you might gouge your eyes before chapter 30 or something when the author stops repeating {Muscular tendons regenerating vitalisation bone... technique] or watever it was called.