The blurb is enough to make me read till the end, detailed description, well expressive and amazing plot. Nice one author!
Great story plus nice plot
This is so good!!!!
I just started reading this story and I must confess is wonderful. I love the story line. Good job author!
I just started tonight and I can't stop flipping the pages. it's so good
I rarely comment and rate books. But this one sure deserved 5 stars. I love the story, the characters, the exchange of conversation, it's really a heart warming one. I wish there will be more chapters, I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing beautiful story Author Nigel! .........
interesting novel,...
ending is not good
I really can't stand it when people give a novel that has just started an unfairly low rating without any explanation. Especially when the novel is so charming. Sometimes, I suspect that some people deliberately do this because they dive into a genre that isn't their usual taste and still expect to enjoy it.
The translation is clear and this is a typical, sweet shoujo novel with a classic villainess storyline and some endearing children added in. So far, the description aligns perfectly with the content.
This is a lighthearted and fluffy novel, but my only critique is that the ending felt quite abrupt. Many plot points, such as Ji Shihan's brother's transformation or the development between Ji Shihan and Wen Yue, were left unresolved. Ji Shihan's brother's character seemed like a potential antagonist, but his change was too sudden after a single punch. Wen Yue's introduction seemed solely to create tension between Shi Chen and his mother, and he disappeared shortly afterward without further exploration. There was potential for a deeper connection between Ji Shihan and Wen Yue, but it was completely overlooked.
Regarding the ending, the most significant point is Nan Xiao's arc. He was portrayed as persistent and unyielding, yet his storyline was abruptly cut off. I expected him to play a bigger role in disrupting the main characters' relationship, given his誓言 not to give up. However, the ending was rushed, leaving me unsatisfied. On the positive note, I'm glad that Shi Ning didn't end up with Nan Xiao, as it deviated from the typical romance trope.
Throughout the story, the focus on studying and romance was clear, and the title appropriately describes the主角 as a Mary Sue character. Everyone fell for her, and she effortlessly overcame challenges. While she was depicted as kind, wise, and innocent, it would have added more depth if there were more conflicts and internal struggles. Overall, it's an enjoyable read for passing the time, despite the lack of angst and depth in some areas.
A bit late but, I cant find shattered star on this website
is it still in your browsing history? Might be able to find the chapter there.