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I'll start by saying that the writing quality is very good. But it's 99.9% conversation filler. One person can say something, and the response wouldn't come till after 8 paragraphs of partially or unrelated info. By the time you get to the response, you forget what you were waiting to hear. Also feels like the author doesn't like their Mc when you can go 5+ chapters or more without a word from them due to a convo between two random citizens talking about a new building.
I am here for the fast pass don't mind me
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The world-building is nice, and the MC is solid. Overall, the book really gives off the vibe of another land, and it pretty much captures the surrealness of that said world. Just a minor tweak though, you can lessen the paragraph division so the readers won't be encouraged to skip through the dialogues. Adding a couple more words on a sentence said by a certain character will really help with engagement... not too much though since that would bore the readers. I tend to in the opposite spectrum where I make all my paragraphs longer... and that's a bad habit I couldn't get out of my system. You're writing style is fresh, you just have to make it smoother. An interesting read overall, definitely sticking around for more ^_^
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If you like Hollywood type novels you going to love this, lets just hope the author doesnt drop it like others.Moreeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Shameless Author review here!I am a big fan of military and isekai genres and I have read numerous titles ranging from GATE to Nihonkoku Shoukan. So as of now with my current state of mind that is filled with inspiration and confidence, I released The First Light Of A New Age where I inserted my own twist and plot into the mix of past military isekai genres. I hope you all like and enjoy reading!
Not worth your time trying to start reading this. The story is good at first until chapter 250. It was like a new different novel or new author taking over that didnt know the plot or story. Like some characters that died suddenly came alive in the story, places and organizations sects all became different. The MC suddenly not OP anymore. In other words, you'll get lost in the story of how different it suddenly gets. So frustrating cus i like this type of genre and then suddenly this happens, fvkkkkk. Hope this helps anyone.
Diving into fantasy from the reality. Nice storyline and awesome ideas. I love this book taht i gave it five stars hehehe. Keep it up author all the best