This Author has turn Dragon Ball into a Chinese novel. The name's of all iconic character's are completely Chinese name that are completely different, also the grammar is bad like I could barely read it. Author change KI into QI, messed up on all titles for gods an everything. The most disturbing thing to watch out for is goku name in this book is not goku anymore. If you see any 5 star or 4 star review then it's fake. Though all that said the Author did a pretty good job on creating his MC that's why the 2 star. Also his MC isn't overpowered at the start is another plus for me. Another plus is MC not a simp or beta.
This is by far the best novel with both the mc and the fl as yanderes i have read. I will also say the author does a really good job with balancing the romance and the other aspects of the story.
Good writing quality but way to much information is given without anything moving the plot forward at all. Give it a try I guess but don’t expect to understand or not be overwhelmed by information.
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Rocky start but then sweet relationship ❤️
love the story so far - really hoping for the love interests bear fruit
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Calion:yes
"A-ah ok fine. So there is this coffee shop near the restaurant and one of the worker is a very good friend of Jin . So before I entered, I helped this worker carry garbage and then he treated me to coffee for free ,and I shared the story saying that I am going to work in the restaurant and I was kinda nervous,while he said that I would get the job because Jin is a very nice guy. That's when I knew they were good friends. Honestly, the guy in the coffee shop is so tall and honestly he is a brunette. You know how much I love brunettes, and his eyes are like chocolate molded into them and his lips are so perfectly aligned and pink, anyone would want to kiss them. His face smooth like milk, sometimes he reminds me of strawberry shortcake!Plus he was right! I got the job! Thanks to you too, you know, for telling me about the job! That explains the whole reason why I bought you the wings, as a token of appreciation and as a friend. "
Great War may`ve ended, but the Cold War was still going on, even if the entirety of House of Gremory was now in Alexander`s hands, awaiting the execution at his command, including the Crimson Satan himself, the man that had put Alexander`s father in coma, from which he still hasn`t awoken yet, whist Baraqiel and Lucina made full recovery from their injuries. There was going to be blood spilled, as Fallen Angels and Angels demanded that House of Gremory, the people that had tried to manipulate Heir of Lucifer, threatened him and attacked Azazel, were put down for good, and Alexander was going to do it with pleasure. The blood was already spilled, as Sirzechs`, Venelana`s and Zeoticus` Peerages were quickly hunted down by combined efforts of Exorcists, Angels, SOP and Hero Faction and killed without mercy. Out of all Servants that House of Gremory had left, only Kiba remained, as he wished to die as a loyal dog of Rias, and Alex would gladly grant his request.
'Who?' A childish voice speaks up.
I want to talk about how this chapter moves because the pacing is genuinely masterful and I don't say that lightly. The chapter opens on a tractor. It ends with a handcart. In between, we travel from the road into the village, from the village entrance to the brigade office, from the office to Aunt Qian's shop, from there to Carpenter Zhao's courtyard. Every scene has a destination. Every destination triggers the next scene. There is no dead air. But here's what's really clever: the author varies the tempo within that forward motion. The tractor ride is fast and chaotic—introductions, Gao Juan's failed attempt to sit near Gu Zheng, Shen An getting dangling in midair, Pei Nian almost revealing her secret ranking. It's breathless. Then they arrive at the residence and the pace drops. Zhao Xingguo gives a long, useless lecture about rules. The camera lingers on the crumbling buildings, the kang layout, the salvaged mats. We feel the weight of the space. Then Pei Nian asks about kang mats and the pace picks up again—Aunt Qian, Carpenter Zhao, the handcart request, the grain ration distribution. The tension building is subtle but constant. It's not action tension—it's social tension. Who will sit where. Who will speak to whom. Who charges money and who doesn't. Who helps and who watches. The handcart moment at the end is a perfect micro-climax: Pei Nian spots the carts, her eyes light up, she pivots from receiving grain to requesting transportation. She's already three moves ahead. And the chapter ends on an image—the group loading grain onto a handcart, Gu Zheng placing Pei Nian's ration onto his cart, telling her to rest. The forward motion continues into the next chapter without a hard stop. There's no cliffhanger, but there's momentum. And momentum is sometimes more addictive than a cliffhanger because it promises that whatever comes next will keep this energy going. The only moment that felt slightly slow was Zhao Xingguo's rules lecture, but even that served a purpose—it established the institutional friction Pei Nian will eventually have to navigate. Nothing is wasted.