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1 star. Why copy Legendary Mechanic bruh...............................................................................................................
Enjoyed this very much, Thank you!
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Chapter 280, I've caught up with the last chapter (for now). No more chapters to read T,T sad pekoStill exciting, although the item description he made kept getting longer and overpowered, it's still acceptable with good story progression.I like the way how he (MC) kept true to the role of 'blacksmith' albeit he's getting stronger and overgeared, building his team power, acknowledging his weakness, and delegate, rather than do everything himself and showing off his 'MC hero' trait.The 'tower' is sadly something that's just 'too godly luck MC' to have, building his base can be another 'base building' arc by itself, but the author skip that. Oh well.The translation still has faults here and there, mistranslated words, incomplete sentence, wrong name, etc. But nothing too destructive, but really need improvement.Overall, touche, this is still one of the best isekai/fantasy novels I've read so far.
I wanna share how empty I feel at the moment. This novel is one of the most unique, logical and intresting works you can find. I’ve left for a while to let it accumulate chapters as I don’t like to read 1 or 2 chapters at a time. However, it has come to my attention that the novel has not been updating for quite a while. I was hoping this would be temporary and I would see more chapters but day after day passed and I could no longer endure not writing this comment. Does anyone know the problem? Is the author caught up with some issues? I’ve looked into the latest chapter released yet I have been unable to find an answer in the author’s comments.
Always love ur stories keep up the good work !!! I always end up wanting more so heres me contributing to the bonus chappie Need more chapters please
we all have different vibes when reading novels..this one is unique and original..I like it and the way it flows??????????????
I am very interested in genres like this, the game world that is formed is very beautiful and makes me want to enter in it. I hope the main character will get a good ending.
THis Is so fascinating and interesting. This story is gonna keep you glue to your phone.
The title page alone is inviting telling me it will be an interesting ride with Dax having unusual dreams. It sounds like it will be interesting to take this journey to find out how he becomes the Magi King! I hope others will also enjoy the ride.
I was going to write sooooooooo much about how terrible and aggravating this novel is and how unrealistic it is which is hilarious cause it’s a fantasy world and for that to be unrealistic you need to mess up REALLY BAD with character development and plot armour and it does so I’ll point some out-mc is too kind(mother was abused and killed, mc is poor in a terrible area, literally no friends and an orphan)-mc thinks the world is sunshine and rainbows(literally the whole novel is just him in denial about how bad humans are LOL like we already experiment on other humans even without being in a fantasy world that literally makes them into lesser humans cause they’re so weak)-mc has flippin dementia(for some reason the mc will forget basic things like for example, the curse world it has three things the mc learns before going in, 1cursed beasts, 2blessed beasts, 3something for a potion that’s very valuable, and what does the mc think when he sees crowds of people trying to harvest this one flower literally putting there lives on the line for it, here’s the paragraph “if prodigies from larger families and clans were asked to pluck flowers, their worth must be enormous...but I can’t think of and extremely expensive potion one can concoct out of bloody flowers” like you flippin idiot there’s only three things and one potion in that list you moron what else could it be a brain supplement cause if it is you need one.Aaaaaaand that’s it for now I still can’t believe how far i got with veins bulging from my forehead in frustration at how annoying this mc is, like on earth it’s a boring realistic planet with the same environment the mc was born into and in some area’s worse and what do we see there are kids that are smarter and more mature then some adults and smarter like street smarts and then in a fantasy world that evolved around killing and enslaving, and his mother that was abused murdered also he was blind had no friends and was as weak as a chicken he thinks the world is sunshine and rainbows that there is no bad in the world and won’t kill anyone, and will openly tell people that I have very op eyes, and that just cause he hasn’t heard anything about it, it just doesn’t exist like transplanting special traits that when the enemy has almost god like power there is for sure a way to transplant traits and you openly tell them about yours because a disabled orphan with no power in the world hasn’t heard about transplanting traits it doesn’t exist and can’t happen
