This kind of Mc are the ones I love most. To me if he had the force he would make a perfect Sith lord. His Hatred, the darkness within, how he machinates and hides his true emotions.I am curious would he create wars for his own amusement? Or watch a camp grow in power and when it reaches a certain point destroy it for multiple purposes? So they don't because an annoyance or to watch their struggle to survive with a sadistic grin? Perhaps he will orchestrate wars and cataclysms for entertainment.I'm curious if any of these will occur. ?
It's been a month since the last update, please don't drop this story and update soon. It's been awhile since I found a story I liked as much as this one and I really want to know what happens next.
Intereasting story with op mc that desperatly needs speller and editor. First 14 chapters have spelling issues but after it - it gets wors. After chapter 15 its sometimes hard to understand some of the meanings of it. I have pushed through it as the story itself is not bad. If you like fantasy world and op mc and can handle issues similar to google translation then you could give a chance to this novel.
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O escritor que escreveu esta história é um amigo meu e venho declarar uma poesia para ele.Fiz uma promessa pra mim mesmo nunca mais comer torresmoAlguém me disse, outro dia, que para sentir satisfação e alegria é necessário ser caridosoMe dá um real, me da um real aí João camainha mainha mania monaiO que fazer se não fazer e aceitar o tédio enfadonhoEntão acho a receita de caminhar na caminhadaE subindo o morro, penso na sensação agradável de vir mais rápido na descida pois estou numa bikeCorro o risco de tropeçar em mim mesmo e cair quebrando o pescoçoPescoço em francês é ânus!Ânus é a parte aboral do corpo, vivendo e aprendendoO que o gato disse para o leite antes de bebe-lo? Miaaau!Não procure saber onde vou meu caminho é toda manhãVocê gosta de maçã? Eu também, mas não tem!Aleluia, aleluia, aleluia!Reze uma ave maria um pai nosso e um graio pai e assim você deverá ser feliz, ser felizA felicidade não esta no pico da montanha, está enquanto você escala esta montanhaufeff!
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"Surprisingly awakens a check in system"... Everything is said once again a novel where the mc is in no danger due to a system where he only needs to check in... Ciao
Imma be honest the stories alright, not too shabby but like it could rlly be better. I just think you could do better, so hopefully this review will give you some good ideas, but either way, explain cultivation better, I don't get it too much and it'll really help. give him a more unique character and maybe write a little better. Anyways, thanks for the story!
Currently the best I'm reading. Still have more room to develop I to the best on WebNovel.
I loved it from the start, our MC is an actual thief in real life, but he is a street thief. Our MC is not OP, but a hard worker understanding his limitations. It is set in a gaming world, and our MC is going in blind nor is he transmigrated. Even the Mc's choice in game are refreshing and novel. A must read and highly recommended.
Aside from a few grammatical errors which could easily be overlooked, this story is of much higher quality than many you can find on WebNovel. I enjoy the blend of Sci-Fi and Fantasy, with youkai (I think that was a youkai) and AI all presenting in the first chapter.Keep up the good work, and I believe you'll excel in no time, Author!♥