Thank you author for this wonderful story…
This is amazing weak to strong and the mc and pet bounding and working together and Amazing story
This story is going great and I find it fun and intresting to read, personally I feel the story is a bit rushed, if you csn please kind of elaborate things and take it a bit slow, so that we can really immerse into the story rather then just feel like reading a rushed story, apart from the pace everything is really awesome keep going, hope you continue uploading.
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The beginning had me a bit confused but as I read it became easier to understand. Lukas is a pretty interesting character and quite matute for a 6 year old probs due to his parents lolz. The brutality of other races by humans although justified I feel it's too much and I hope the author covers it in the coming chapters. It's a good read, give it a try guys ?
This is an entertaining superhero story that should appeal to fans of the genre. Although I haven't read a huge amount of superhero stories, I enjoy them and think this one has lots of potential. Style: The style of this story is casual and pretty direct, there's no purple prose or over description of things really, it's straightforward and pretty clear about what's going on. Grammar: I think I noticed a couple typos, but nothing that really distracted me from the story at all, so I didn't have any problems with the grammar, it reads like normal to me!Characters: Hope seems like a cool main character who I look forward to following as she grows. I'm not sure what the future holds for her but I think she will continue to develop strengths and hopefully become part of a meaningful community. Story: I am not very familiar with superhero stories in general, but so far this seems like a good set-up for lots of interesting events to take place. The super powers mentioned seem strong and though I can't really guess where the plot is going to go, it should be interesting. Overall a promising start up to where I've read!
Fast paced story with likeable characters and a poignant message that speaks to values a good person should have
story development, world background, writing style are all decent
a lot of the names are wrong, the grammar is a little bit decent, but some translations are wrong, like luffy send he wants to be one piece??? that should be he wants to be the pirate king or he wants to find the one piece,,, plus his development is to fast getting rewards that he does not need to train and instantly knows how to use it to its maximume level,,, nope its to fast, slow down
is it harem story is good it would be better if it is harem pls reply
i would have given 5 ? rating for the character design but there's nothing in this page hate stories like this that doesn't provide photos of the main characters
The story is a bit slow and the MC is your average apocalypse junkie like you most likely he has a decent backstory overall the key difference between most story's like this recently is there is no real "game elements" and the MC has a heart problem overall story is good but slow the chapters are also small but it's a good story Luv you author for your first story it's great