I guess I should stop it while I can ...in book 2 and I already find the mc too stupid...story lacks depth ..it's like the author wrote one of his dreams ...looks good in general but not so if you look indeed.
Update pls??
Great work, can't wait to read more, upload more chapters.
you did a great work and more updates please ?❤️??
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This is a awesome story. New favorite for sure. Read this book, it's really good. The author is really good at writing. Keep up the good work. Best of luck.
This is the Author. Am grateful for your time reading my novel. This is a master piece. A novel that surpasses all. It is really addictive so try at your own risk. Please support my work by sending some gifts. For all shall be rewarded~.
this got me hooked right away from the mother son interaction and then the ML in the picture, so excited about what the story will become
Details which make no sense. Using words on words, power levels which have never been introduced . Contrasting yourself within the first 14 chapters ( magic can't stay hidden , children show reality bending power) then in the next few chapters oh only noble bloodline can use supernatural . oh legendary get 150 year lifespan , legend is first level but of domain , but in next chapter nop only specific domains can make you live longer .... Ranks have never been introduced, the writing style is annoying and the mystery feels forced instead of having anticipation I am cringing at how hard the author is trying and failing at iy
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I really liked the synopsis of the book. In few lines it caught my attention which is great for me because I decide to read the book after reading the synopsis. The plot of the book is good as well. Good job!
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