The synopsis hints that this story has more in it than it seems.
The chapters need some editing, but nothing that damages the story as it is right now. The ML is easily hated, but I bet there is more about him than the first chapters shows.
funny story
Why would you reveal almost everything in the book description? I mean, I don't want to read it because it's all said and done, and two mates, tragedies... No thanks
Next chapter pls
I'm really annoyed. I loved this sweet story but I really don't like the sudden unhinged action. I'm devastated about Drew and the story continueing 6 years later. How can you do this to Bennet author? He really doesn't deserve what he going through. It's horrible. I don't feel like reading anymore.
The novel is underwhelming, unfortunately. I've deducted one star because I anticipated from the start that the author would intentionally create obstacles for the main character (MC). The plot involving a letter to the love interest serves as a predictable example of making the MC's life miserable. The author's clear attempt to sabotage the MC's confession is what earns them a negative rating. I was so frustrated with the writing that I ended up slamming my fist on the floor, and my hand still aches hours later.
After a series of novels with intense plots and emotional depth, this particular book perfectly met my expectations. The characters were incredibly endearing and likable.
Really? Basically all of them are on this site.
My house of horrors
Reverend insanity
Lord of the mysteries
Beware of chicken
Stop, friendly fire
Second coming of gluttony
Shattered star
City of sin
Cultivation chat group
Practical guide to evil
Astral pet store
Omniscient readers view point
Mother of learning
Experimental log of the crazy lich
All those are one here.
In fact the only one I suggested on a different site is invisible dragon and that was more of a meme suggestion.
Pls tell me this book will still be update ? why did it stop there, what will happen to them? What is her choice? Aaaaaaaaaaah
Leí tantas historias de regresar en el tiempo... Pero esta es la mejor!!! Excelente fundamento y trama... Gracias autor!!
100% recomendado
I mean you can have a racist MC and still have a good story. the MC of lolita is a pedophile but the author isn't and it's a great book. Maybe the MC is racist because he's extremely nationalistic because of the circumstances he lives in. idk. I think it would be different if the author was racist.
The relationship between the main character (MC) and the male lead (ML) isn't terrible, although ML's treatment of the original owner of MC's body raises concerns. It's puzzling how one could develop feelings for someone who subjected them to such trauma, like the prince's tragic suicide after being repeatedly tormented.
The MC's character has received quite a bit of criticism, with some finding them childish, particularly due to their fascination with horses. I understand that their attempts to display intelligence might come across as cringe-worthy for the reader, but everyone has their flaws.
The plot itself keeps things engaging, but it can feel overly smooth at times. For instance, the uncle's return to seek revenge against ML was initially portrayed with seriousness, but the climax saw ML easily defeating and killing him, which might have been expected. The kingdom's acceptance of this event and the subsequent apology to the princess in her own land seemed rushed, especially when MC's math prowess inadvertently led to the princess momentarily forgetting about her late husband.
There does seem to be a lack of genuine conflict or obstacles in the story. While the characters' journeys are entertaining, it would benefit from more depth and realistic challenges to maintain the audience's interest.