Nice story. Beautifully ellobrated with fine use of words . Characters and situations are such a beautifully described in words which seems like Watching movie
Hate after chapter pet and stopped reading it.......................Mc is dominated with her biggest weakness first time that was found out easily.
I'm one of those "silent or ghost readers" I don't comment or review much. I just wanted to tell the author that please improve your writing quality
I like stories about cooking, cute daughters and systems...... Whats not to love? Yes the dialogue is occasionally quite cringe and the wife is a doormat but its still lighthearted and cute..
It's been a long while since I've read a story on webnovel that can actually grab your attention, enthrall you with its characters, and make you believe in a world of fantasy. This is story is a gem. Author should be very proud
The writing is good (I love the intro) and and the world building is excellent, I won’t spoil you but you’ll find out after you read it. Anyone who likes cultivation related stories (or is new to this genre) should give it a read! Even though there are very few chapters now, I'm hooked to reading more. Look forward to more updates soon!
Don't read this novel, chapters only consist of badly edited machine translation, bad world background, worse character development, and inconsistent cultivation stage.
More? give me more of the juicy philosophy. The more the better. and it here and there salt and pepper. Ok i think i need to sleep i am kind of going crazy.
Oh My God, This is the best novel in the recent update. Its crazy good. I can’t stop laughing
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Nice nice i really love the book and waiting for more updates
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This novel is amazing.
The characters are interesting, and they will grow deepen in later chapters. Something that was VERY rare in other novels recently.
I thought this will be like System based novels that seemed to be popping up every once in a while, and I think that will not stop soon.
After the first few chapters, I expected the quality of the story to dropping. It was due to the two MCs, their characters seemed to be hard to be understood.
Yet- the Author do not disappoint me at all, the characters really grow, and although they seemed ridiculous (well, maybe they actually are, at least for the Male MC I was almost certain... If not for-) they are good. Really good.
In short, like I had said, this novel is AMAZING.
Btw, for the volume 1, you can reach the Author in Discord for it. He will give you a free copy.
I asked him a few days ago and he gave me one. You can find the link for Discord in the chapters, or synopsis page.