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I said in my previous review I'll edit the ratings I first gave so this is my edited review.
First, the writing quality is 4/5, I can't use the MTL I read to rate this for its quality since I can't read chinese characters.
Story development is 3/5, its not bad, but from what I can read, its not that good either, just the usual face slapping.
Character design is 3/5 too, why? Because from what I can read, the characters other than MC and FL is generic, there are no depths.
You may have noticed I am using "from what I can read" the reasonfor that is:
update stability: 2/5, I don't know if author dropped it, or is in hiatus, but the last update was december 2021, and it ended at chapter 49, I don't know if webnovel have the chapter 50 and above, but yeah, 49 is the last update. I want to put 1/5 in there but because I don't know if webnovel have the rest, I will put 2 for now, will edit again if they have the rest of chapters.
world build is 3/5, because from the chapters, you can't get enough info from the world the characters are living in.
A very good chapter, I will be waiting for action in next few chapters. Very good translation. What will be your posting schedule here? Same as in wuxiaworld something else
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The picture is cute...The picture is cute...The picture is cute..The picture is cute..The picture is cute.... IDK anything , i just knowThe picture is cute
A riveting work of art from this author, the plot, character development, storyline and setting is just superb. The work of a genius
my first impression of this novel : "d*mn what kind of book is this? martial art gamer? how can that be !!! this must be a joke ! "
after I read until latest chapter : " D*MN WHAT'S THE MEANING OF THIS ?!?! REALISE MORE CHAPTER !!! HURRY UP !!!! "
500 of all 600 chapters are behind a pay wall... and the chapters cost so much! Based on what you can but spirit stones for this book would cost 50$ at the least... and chapters are still coming out and once again getting locked... soon it’ll be 100$ for this book and maybe more... and don’t bother complaining to qidian... they already know they’re scamming the dipshits who don’t realize what they’re paying
I think It was better before he entered the events of the Empress of the Moon and he saved her younger sister and thinks about hitting him. She prepared cheap comedy in anime.