Unfortunately grammar and spelling are not ok. Quite often the POV switches from first person to a narrator and then back, creating confusion. Character development is weird and character motivation changes between chapters with no explanation. I would advise author to proofread thoroughly.
such an amazing writer. Please keep writing author
omg ang interesting ng plot!!!
Very nice book!!!
This was one of the worse books. The author kept repeating the same things over and over. I am so angry at myself for wasting my money and time.
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Let me just... process the stakes progression in these chapters because it went from 'girl needs to survive college' to 'full-on judicial revenge operation' in like two chapters. The Lv Feibai scene is where it all kicks off. Su Yin lures him to a junkyard with a HACKED surveillance camera — that's premeditated. She's not just reacting, she's setting a trap. And the system helping her hack it shows she's got resources she's not fully utilizing yet. The stakes here are personal survival — he abused the original host, and she's making sure he NEVER comes near her again. But then it escalates to the court scene, which is where the stakes go from personal to systemic. She's not just beating up her abusers — she's using the legal system, turning Wang Zhiying against Su Yongyuan, offering her a deal (three years or life with him). That's chess-level thinking. The conflict isn't just 'revenge' anymore, it's about dismantling an entire corrupt family structure. And underneath all of this is the Lu Xingcun thread — the favorability system creates its own stakes. What happens if she gets the Main God fragment? What happens if he figures out she's using him? The romantic subplot isn't just flavor, it's a ticking clock. The author keeps raising the temperature and I haven't even reached chapter 27 yet and I'm already sweating.
Great book!!!just waiting for more updates please
130 chapters 9-5-23
Would love for his beta to have actually not died but was rescued, lost his memories, got them back and see's that Derek married his mate and wants revenge. ...
I can't wait for the second book
Please tell me you're going to do more. What about Casper, Rocket, Nixon, The Red Devils, Dez, the Alabama crew and your new character Meathead?