Nice story, the characters are so far pretty relatable and funny. I enjoyed the chapters flow, nice overall writing and so far no grammar problems. Hope to see this book grow much more [img=coins]
It hook me at first, but I still can't believe how people can write sooo stupid Mc. He says : Im not strong enough, im need to be careful, procedes to flirt with a woman who is clearly the crush of a influential arrogant young master that will be trying to kill him... Oh, I have meet a superior being, that is strong enough to bring the whole country where I live to his knees, procede to disrespect him. Im okay with Mc who are helpless and powerless but at least you must give him something good, idk, inteligence, charisma, but no.
La calidad de escritura es buena.El comienzo y el concepto fue interesante.Lamentablemente, el mc y el desarrollo de la historia lo arruinan.
the MC should be very good in multiple choice ???it will full of slaping face (hard) scenes. just hope for the best from author, ????
The story is pretty interesting. there some grammartical mistake but understandable. Mc is smart and not genetic type of mc..............................
A VR Game! A Mage! Finally, Beautiful Characters!!Author tried to elaborate the story in a way that readers could understand, and although I could see some mistakes, it's still kept at bare minimum.Best Wishes to Author! ?
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The first 10 chapters were good but it goes downhill after thatThe pace is too slowThe characters lack substanceThe Mc character is unauthenticMany supporting characters that are irrelevant to the story
The most beautiful reading in my life, I hope you do not yearn The author is very creative. Thank you for this wonderful work ❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?❤️?
Story seems very interesting you've got me hooked and, No Harem Yes, Harems just ruins novels imo just a really annoying and an eyesore to read