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Truly, this is a special original novel and I love the unique storyline.
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in my opinion the big paragraphs are one of the reasons it is annoying to read. they should have wrote smaller so it would pick interest of reader more easily
The novel's idea and world are very interesting, not to mention the addition of astral beasts; at first, it was nice to see a novel where the father wasn't dead or made useless, only to let the MC end up with their mother. Sadly, this happens, and all development toward a balanced family ends. There is no inc*st tag, but there will be some, which isn't my thing. The characters are alright; the women feel like carbon copies of each other because of the scent thing, and all fall for him easily, but the MC himself is interesting and has a very dynamic difference in his two sides and should interest anyone who reads for sure.The power system lacks depth, suffers the same as LK, and is wishy-washy at best. While the action is average, it has some good parts despite being weaker than many current novels.As for writing, quality remains the same as LK, and there is little improvement between the two. The usage of italics also makes it difficult to read, but it's better than many novels on WN, so give it a read while you’ve nothing to do. There are a lot of good ideas countering the negative.
while the book is good, is this a translated Chinese book?, I can see a lot of subtle communistic views being portrayed ?
it got dropped for 4 months now and I like the story.
Honestly this is one of my favorite novels on this site and top 5 all time novels. I just wish it didn't lock at chapter 40, I would love to continue reading but I cant really afford to buy chapters atm.
Oooooooo, I was actually hooked, what an organic progression, loved it. 10/10. Definitely would read again some day. Nice job author keep it up please!???
more chapters please.....more chapters please.....more chapters please.....more chapters please.....more chapters please.....more chapters please.....
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This novel is a "Mission type system" which is lame, because it will be a forced plot. Don't like this type of system. Lame and boring. It will never run out of forced plot.
If you are a man of culture and don't bother with this lame mission type system then it may garner your taste/interest.
I would like this novel if the system is not that lame mission type.