*This is my personal view on the development of the story.*It started out so good! it had me instantly recommending the story to a friend, as I loved the whole short Arc of him being a Trooper, but from there I must say it sped up quite a bit, him turning into a padawan right after the first war/scuffle. which, for me, left much to be desired. As I had hoped for him to take the captain/commander role for a while longer as a Trooper. But again, this is just my personal view, the story is good and well fleshed out, so do check it out as it has plenty unique points.
This novel is amazingly detailed and while there some cons to it, the novel is detailed and the MC is reasonably characterized. I feel that this novel should be selected as it is a refreshing twist on a original topic and I would to see where it would go. Not that I really like this novel.
sir why don't you update chapter regularly. ? I like to read this novel but author didn't update chapter . so disappointed ☹️.?????☹️☹️
So far it is a good Novel. The setting is nice and something new. Hope it will get picked because it has the potential to become a Novel worth reading.
Quite tough to judge this novel, its obvious that many things are lost in the translation, especially in the first chapters, when many important info, mainly about the world setting, are not well-fully presented. Having said that, the translation quality has improved a lot, its actually not bad now. Anyway the concept is really interesting and well written, the novel has assimilated most wuxia elements and used them in a "modern"-apocalyptic world. The world build has soooo much potential, there is humour, decent romantic relationships, ruthless-kind mc, actually almost everything. Its really sad that another great novel of chen dong is undermined, this one by the translation in the first chapters and perfect world by its slow beginning and "abrupt" change of mc's character.
Really good hentai/18+ novel, the interactions with both his mother and sister, plus his way of thinking would even have s*x with his mother who was quiet nice. Although I hope he doesn't just stick to them only and expandes his empire.
Okay, it’s not like I’m being ruthless, it’s just... a mess. I’m usually very accepting of novel ideas, but this is just a terrible assortment. Can’t make any sense of it, at first you can still enjoy it but it just keeps getting more and more out of hand. It’s the first time I felt that the author had absolutely no plan for the novel and just kept throwing in ideas as they came and hope that they fit together. Well, they don’t. I’m really disappointed because this actually had potential. The characters at least are reasonable. Oh well, some people have said that this is a good novel to pass the time while you wait for updates on your favourite novel, but for me it’s just a waste of time, you’ll end up feeling disappointed and frustrated when you drop it.Enough said, it’s just my opinion. Hope some people can still enjoy it.
story is good and well developed and characters is also good but updating story is pretty bland try updating more frequently good luck ? ?
Really looking forward to this novel. So far, 26 chapters in, we have the male MC who gets thrown between modern China and a feudal alternate world every three days. He can't control this, nor is there any reason given for his abilities. Time runs slower in the other world though, so when he spends three days there, ten have passed in China. Which leads to some problems when he gets thrown there without warning. The MC himself is super average. His only advantage is that he can look things up when he flips back into the modern world. Which is perfect, because I was getting tired of MCs that remember minute and obsolete production processes (I'm looking at you, Release the Witch, and the MC building a steam engine from scratch). He also can only bring between worlds items that are touching him when he travels. So there's no mass influx of items in either direction, but more of an exchange of ideas. Based on the title, I expect there to be romance at some point. By the way, the empress is a badass. There's no indication of a harem, but unfortunately you never know.
Hate to do this but don’t bother reading unless you don’ care about the story not finishing. Got to almost 700 out of 1200 to find out that it just stops at 1200 and never continues. What a letdown
A história e realmente boa, mas logo depois ela começou a fica tediosa não sei se foi só comigo ou não. Mas estarei apoiando o autor em sua nova história ?
I feel like this could be a gem if the author plays his cards right.Characters are fun, stability of updates is great, but the writing can be chaotic sometimes to the point that I don't really know what's going on.Especially during POV changes.But hey nobody is perfect, right? So dear author I would recommend getting an editor because this novel has a LOT of potential and chaotic writing may scare potential readers away.Much love! ♥