Wtf is wrong with volume 7? Where is the continuation?
Generic fantasy story, but introduces new concept with the seven ancestors
If someone is feeling not so satistfied with the ending and explanation, you may read this. It's the only theory that I could come up with to console my heart and be satisfied with the novel.Wei Luo (the one with Zhao Jie) dreamt of her parallel world self and the consequences of her own decisions. In reality she was never really reborn.she took the dream seriously and avoided the disasters. The same goes for Li Song.So the Li Song in one world is dead for real and the other Li Song dreaming about all this learnt his lesson too.The best thing I could come up with •
Tong wei hasnt contacted mc since she gone to us and he didn't even asked her parents what happened what an idiot storyline
I really recommend this book!
(Please don’t drop)
So overall it’ a good and interesting book. No major grammar errors or any major mistakes.
However, I started noticing some flaws and decided to drop around ch. 48.
Here is my reasoning:
I get a feeling that the writing is a little shallow. The mc encounters some problem that isn’t explained too much, then immediately god-snaps and fixes whatever it is. For example, building and creating all of his inventions. Very few people know the exact compositions of materials. Going further, very few people have enough expertise in a field to recreate even one of the varied things the mc is making. How can a person be able to make say different shampoos, which the author probably just googled a basic recipe, and then go ahead and start making concrete and buildings. Making a building is super complicated even if you are able to get rid of the manpower issue with magic.
All of the sudden inventions just start to become unreal and unimaginable for the mc to come up with them. Especially if there were previous reincarnator. How the h*ll is the mc the first to come up with the types of food he is. Add onto that the cleaning supplies as well. The first thing on a reincarnators to do list would have been these exact things so why is the mc the first. I mean, the previous reincarnator was a WOMAN. Do u expect a WOMAN from the modern world to go one day without at least trying to make some kind of shampoo with magic. It’s jus bullshut.
Based on everything that is happening I can already know what is going to happen in the locked chapters just by their names.
My real problem is there is no depth and realness to the other world. The only real worldbuilding we get is medieval magic sword world with demons. NOTHING ELSE. The food of the world isn’t described, everything is worse than what the mc can bring to the table. Author, u do realize that America didn’t make all the types of food in the world right. It just has a bunch of the worlds food available. That means that there is different food everywhere. In this other world, all u could bear to describe of their food was the bad jerky that the knights had. Otherwise all u did was say that the mcs food was the best. That’s all. I mean, come on. If a place was able to make chocolate and tea, two things that take complex actions and recipes to make, u expect me to believe they can’t make some other food like fried food. U also realize that fried food isn’t the best food in the world right?
Oh well I’ll stop ranting. It was an ok story but if u want a deep and interesting story, don’t get ur hopes up for this story. Its a watered down version of Wise Man’s Grandson and other similar isekai stories.
I was expecting a more mysterious story due to the synopsis but all it is is the mc and the reincarnation of his wife, i.e. the princess, being so blind that they don’t recognize each other the entire time even though the author seems to make a point of when they should recognize each other.
I’m really liking it so far and looking forward to mor! Added to my library.
The book is very enjoyable to read and the plot flow is very nice. The character development is also good, I can't wait to read more chapters.
given that it is a translation I am certain that the bad opinions have been deleted if you can tell me if after a hundred chapters we start to see the Asian names again or if the cultural sentences which are not understandable in another language remained for understanding thank you.
I thought it would be boring since the system wasn't overpowered, but I actually had fun reading the *normal* life that the system wanted for Amber.I am getting more interested now and I am excited for Regis and Amber to meet.PS. Please bring more updates.
I'd say it's an interesting story, I like hunter novels.No grammatical error as far as I can read;And this isn't bad, I'd recommend it if you're looking for a light read.
story good can be little more detailed and world building is also good not very fast as regular manhua I liked it and also recommend it for enjoyment funny and interesting story would be great if it continues here