I fricking love this story it's suuuuper funny^^
Good story it was slow faced and detailed ..Can i ask if this will be a harem?
The writing style is pretty nice, and a daily update, or more sometimes. The characters have depth, and the world hasn't been introduced yet so let's see. A very interesting read tbh.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
I like the fact that the story did not have crazy jealous exs or love rivals. It was a refreshing plot to read. Initially, I did not expect there to be magical elements in this story since the plot by itself was strong and interesting enough even without it. The plot had me hooked from the start. I also liked how well rounded the whole story was. I usually don’t liked multi-POVs in a story but in this case it was well done, making the story more multidimensional. The bond between Jian Ai, her brother and her mother was really wonderful! None of them were over the top and they respected each other’s opinions and decisions wholeheartedly. This highlighted the author’s mature writing style and the ability to portray so many complex characters in a holistic manner. The characters were well-developed and acted their age; be it the adults or young adults. The author did them justice. I wish we got to see more interactions between the three of them. Young Master Ji is such an entertaining character. I really enjoyed reading all the banter between both the FL and ML!The ending was rushed and somewhat abrupt. I wish there was more of how the M Group and how it developed in the future. Maybe an interview between the media and Jian Ai about being hte youngest CEO of such a big enterprise would have been great!Overall, a solid 4 out of 5 stars for me. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
OH-MY-FREAKING-GOD THIS NOVEL IS... BRUH... THIS IS A MASTERPIECE LOL... I started reading yesterday and oh my god, you can see me freaking out in the comments of almost all the chapters. You got me in the beginning. And hell yeah, Ann-nim, I'm shocked because when I started reading this yesterday it had only 9K and now it's almost 16K lol what the heck, congratulations. So, I loved the way you built the characters, really, I was theorizing like crazy about who the male lead truly was, you saw lol. The female lead it's... she's badass and it's easy to fall for her. Well, I really love the story and I'll be looking forward to seeing what will you do next. I hope you'll be to reach 1M, cuz you deserve it. And thanks for interacting with us in the comments too, you're funny lol.
Hmmmmmmmm, looking at the synopsis, we can expect a lot of face slapping. The good news tho is that it didn't mention beautiful ladies ????????????????????????
Novel writer background is cool. Escaping from prison is also cool. the conversations about the author and escaping from prison will be hilarious.I want this to be picked. ???????????????
Wonderful book that I hope will continue to grow into a masterpiece ................................................. .. ...... ... ... ..
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very unique and intresting story so far. Amazing mix between fantasy and mystery elements which makes you never want to stop reading. i would highly reccomend you read it guys, and i hope it gets continued as soon as possible.
I never try to write anything like this but for this story, I have to. My first thought was how far it could move me. When I read the first chapter, I just blinked and nodded. Alright. Not that bad. But when I finished the chapter Neo-Genesis. I wept tears. Yes, this man did cry. I was surprised that the author has a way to tell the story. If this novel were a man, he would have a high IQ and EQ because the storyteller is smart and smart to move this reader to feel like the characters. I like most of everything, plot, characters, the warmth of this family, and some little hints that the author already put in at the beginning. What I like the most is ‘less is more.’ The narration is not overdramatic. The author just tells his story and uses surrounding tools to show details which is simple but ‘deep’. Great job. Undisclosure is one of a few fictions I read on my smartphone and did not check how long the chapter is. I read it smoothly. There are some holes, for example, POV, the unnatural conversation. Or the writing of some scenes is not powerful enough to build emotions. But it’s just a little thing that I can overlook. I recommend it. This story should deserve more views.
It's good. Don't let chapter 36 (if I dont remember wrongly) fool you, even though this chapter may disappoint you with all the soul crystal thing, dont drop the novel yet. It will become better. The only critic I would make is: the mc is not a villain so the title is misleading and all the plot exposed in the synopsis (three souls in a body and all that stuff) appears only around chapters 100-130 (and is explained quite poorly tbh).The chapters are too short and have a lot of useless information. There is no character development. Even though the mc went trough a lot of things and "mental breakdowns" there is no difference between him before the mental breakdown and after that. These mental breakdowns and "lessons" just serve the purpose of making you believe that the main character is growing, but he still acts and thinks the same way.Anyway, the novel is entertaining if you can ignore or overcome the points mentioned above, so that's all that matters I guess