The story is actually a lot better than I had expected. There’s a ton of 18+ scenes, who’s is good for me, but it’s skippable and doesn’t take up multiple chapters which is also good. Plot is A1 so far. I hope the author doesn’t drop this one, it’s super good.
This is a new blend of Superheroes & System novel markets. It'll keep you hooked till the end. But one of the reviews does really point out the novel which was bugging me. I believe in author could further improve since he'd also written a lot of works previously. ?
Love it keep it up author????sarangayor ?????????????????? weldone?????????????????
This novel is good, the character design, the world building, everything. I really really love this novel. The author's writing is just great. No hard language, no unnecessary info dumping.
This story is great. The character is an excellent player who dreams super big, but who doesn't? He is very arrogant and his attitude seems to get worse as fame and confidence sets in. I really don't like this attitude, but he's a teenager. A teenager who is gaining a lot of attention. He'll probably grow as the chapters go on, but I just wish he wouldn't do anything stupid. I don't know if the story will have any romance, but I'm already casting my vote.•Sadie Sink•Emma Myers•Hailee Steinfeld•Sophie Turner•Emília Clark•Millie Bobby BrownAny of them. The first three because they would be my first choice. The other three because they are British. Now, if you already have someone in mind, I would like to know.The story is amazing. Don't forget it.
Awesome book, author. keep it up.I'm going to support your book no matter what.
Hello guys, this is the author here!Well, at first I did not want to write a review myself. But after getting different reviews, and one even blaming that I don't even read their comment in my story.I was left with nothing but to write one.At first.For a new writer like me. Having gotten a comment is like a source of happiness and motivation, so I don't think I can comment on your negative remark.But if I am getting blamed, that clearly means you did not like the way the story is going or something that makes you not like it. So, I hope you can tell that directly. Instead of going about it in a roundabout manner.Then thanks again for writing the review.It meant that you read my creation, and that's something I'm quite happy about.
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well detailed action and good decision making Axel embraced the new hostile mon that presents itself that's what I liked and those from the first chapter
Changed the book title and cover to the paper/hardcover version since it’s completed. This is a raw manuscript so forgive the grammar please.
5 out 5,this is a great novel.pkease support my novel business mortal.