i am too disappointed mmc os too braindead and story have much more potential to become a better work hufffff what a waste . . . . . . . . . . .
Forced slavery on the main character which his family and even himself is fine with? Garbage and forced just to set up the "Prince of Darkness" storyline. No clue why everyone thinks this is a great novel.
Really worthwhile read, the author just needs to check he gets the right gender (she/he) a couple of times but apart from that there’s no glaring translation errors. The story is entertaining and a fresh take on the disciple/template trope which doesn’t become boring after the first 10-15 chapters. The MC is a little bland and low key but that doesn’t mean he accepts bullying in his normal life he will use his disciples to take revenge on people that have slighted or attacked him before. His disciples chatacter building is a little shallow but I expect that as more chapters get released and they get more story time that they will be fleshed out some more and made more interesting. So far definitely one of the better options to vote for.
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overall a good book slow on the character development. Nice story line between main character and pets, a little humorous but overall a good book,.
Actually pretty good if only it had a ton lots of chapters..................................................................................
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Story sound awesome. But in my opinion, too many wish is not good. All the mc need is high intelligence. being smart enough too build his own AI. building a farm where no one could touch like a valley surrounded by the radiation watsteland and probably monster. mc is smart enough to build a teleporter allowing access to him and anyone he allow. removing two wish and making it fit more into the world. i don’t really like how something unnatural is pushed into the world. A supernatural power that can’t be explain squezed into a sci story.
This was super interesting to read!!! I liked how the ML traveled through the road of reincarnation and met others as well. That was something completely different from how most reincarnation stories do! Your writing style is amazing, and despite the grammatical errors, this story keeps you wanting more! I also noticed how you change the paragraphs that I commented on, and I thought that was amazing! An author who is willing to listen to what their readers has to say, is an author that will surely get far in life! Just be sure to take account your own feelings as well when taking suggestions! Other than that, KEEP GOING STRONG!
I hear that the raw is good so I have hopes for this since I cant read chinese or japanese. this also seems like a cool and different concept compared to what novels are out right now
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I really love slice of life stories like this! its so wholesome !!? And author-san did a great job writing! I just hope that he can upload 10 chapters a day???