This story is progressing nicely with all the intriguing developments of Yao Ying and Yao Ling. The two main protagonists’ characters are written well although I find that the author made Yao Ying into a man who’s too fixated on *** and is overly jealous. There’s a time and place for acts of love, yet he’s constantly finding ways to ‘eat tofu’ from his wife. If I’m Yao Ling, I’ll probably be so stressed and upset to be just taken for *** object. I hope that this mission will give the readers more actions and less of Yao Ying’s clumsy attempts to seduce his wife. I often skipped chapters of Yao Ying’s lascivious acts of seducing Yao Ling and move on to the story itself.
Novel Summary (copied)Xia Fei took a bottle of Siwu Gene Optimization Solution with no trademark, no date, no description, and no place of origin.Our story starts here…- Description from qidianDetailsShort Titlet:tSGOSAlternate Titlet:t超级基因优化液Statust:tCompleted (1680 chapters)Authort:tNine Light Years Per SecondCountryt:tChinaTypet:tWeb NovelGenret:tAction, Adventure, Sci-fi
SPOILERS I've read up to 620 and I feel like I'm just being trolled by the author at this point. The author just decides to destroy the world that Gabriel/Karyk is from for absolutely no reason. Also whenever Gabriel/Karyk decides to kill or betray someone, it just miraculously happens that they had ulterior motives all along.
Love the story and such, but I’m mostly gonna talk about the slow updates. I’ve heard rumors that the author recently had a baby (If true, congrats) but I don’t think that’s the entire reason. I’m pretty sure the author is also busy translating this and posting this work in another language. If you search up this novel theirs another one under it posted by the same author in another language and it’s currently get 21 chs a week last checked.
I'm seriously enjoying the story so far I'm interested to see what the author die with the world they have created. uvucivivjvkvjcjvjvkvkvkj
I like the story a lot. The characters are well designed for the most part and the plot has steady progress. I would recommend this novel.
The whole plot was just full of unnatural and unrealistic events that completely ruined the immersion for me. The author just kept on forcing situations and writing bad characters with no motive other than to be cannon fodder for MC to face slap. It's essentially just a very surface level wish fulfillment novel which some people may enjoy so try it if that's your thing but I'd say otherwise you might be better off looking for something else.
There is something interesting about this story. Perhaps it is the nuances of intrigue? I have been enjoying reading this and I think others may like it. The character descriptions are limited, which is uncommon in light novels. The setting is underdeveloped, which is common in light novels. There are some minor typos and punctuation mistakes. Overall, it is readable so it gets a pass from me.
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Love this author, she is literally the only reason I have the app. The only books in my library are hers. I’ve tried others but none come close to hers.
love the story