wow this is the good novel i have ever had ... give me it raw name please......................................................................................
I still give it 4 stars at first but, i stop reading at ch 260. The story becomes weird and hard to understand............................ ......... ..
less gooo, just wanted to say the book cover is of hanekawa from monogatari :^ shes a great character, I reccomend watching it or reading it
Very fun read, horrible translation. almost mtl............................................................................................
translation is so bad it's crazy. 1. the author is using a translator 2. author doesn't edit chapters before uploading 3. descriptions are long and meandering 4. mc is annoying and unlikable 5. mc is a transmigrator for no reason whatsoever 5. THERE'S ZERO ORIGINALITY.I'd give this 0 stars if I could. Only read this if you're desperate for trash, but I can promise you there are stories with similar premises that execute way bette.r
Simply amazing. Its really good. Been a while since I read something of this caliber. The responsibility and determination of the characters is something else. Its really well written. Its hard to describe. I thought it was just some generic cheat novel, oh dear I was wrong. Onto the mtl. Too bad that the quality is really abysmal, every feeling is gone now. Still cant be helped.
From the start the story is memorable and easy to get sucked into. It's also very original compared to other novels on this platform, which is big plus not only to me but a lot of readers out there wanting something new to read.
whitesnow you are already one of my favorite authors I'm coming from your other book , I caught up with latest chapters and came here to read another great work from you please just don't drop any of these two books you know how to write a good plot with an awesome harem ( with actual romance + Charecter development + no forced love ) and it's really refreshing the only problem is the lack of chapters but that's not your fault , your not a machine so please continue your excellent work and good luck ☺
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Review after chapter 217.Overall the novel and it's progression is good. However, there are a few quirks.Firstly, his background on earth is not defined or limited. For example, what year did he leave earth? How much knowledge does he really have about weapon making? Is he genius enough to create new futuristic technology without any assistance?Next the gun strength seems a bit off. However, that can be fixed by explaining why each gun can kill specific ranks of beasts or humans. Additionally, the limits and reason for things can be defined a bit better. For example, why certain technology exists in a country, but the rest of technology is pretty archaic. Or why someone had a specific type of technology but people above him do not have similar advanced tech.Most importantly, the story needs an editor. The English is good enough to get across the story, however, the errors definitely break immersion.This story could jump to a 4.5 and top rated novel if the previous and future chapters are edited. Keep up the work!
The plot was interesting so I was expectant. Didn't expect that as soon as the missions began, the development of the story would be very awkward, or should I say forced. I stopped reading at exactly chapter 10.
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