Since no one made comments, I'll be the first. This is a very interesting story. A lot of bitter sweet moments, but a good ending. I love how the characters come together. There is a lot of quotes and poetic wording in this, but it paints a vivid picture. There's sadness, love, anger, despair but within good reason and good conflict. Give this a read. You'll have a good cathartic cry and will be happy by the end. This is a good read.
The characters are life like and the start of the story was very interesting. I would like to see more of Archer and adventures through this world, looking forward for more chapters from the author!
I love the new book so far. I have read every chapter of all of your books on here. Enjoy your storytelling and gaming aspect of all your books. The only thing I wish is that they had physical copies so I can put them on my bookshelf. My only critique is the same. I always have which is I wish there was more chapters out already because I like to binge read. That is not bad at all because it lets me look forward to the next release of chapters.
Is this a Chinese novel? It looks like.
. .
A overall good novel. I have tried 5 chapters and can say that although there are mistakes it's nothing some time to reproof cannot fix. I have added it to my library to binge later. Hope the author will make the chapters longer. ✌✌peace. The plot is kinda nice tho..
the best one this trial read, it's hilarious i was laughing the whole time while reading this. he has the curse that reverse the effect of everything he do to himself, and it leads to some of the most hilarious scenes in the novel, the jokes are funny and the talk between characters is simply pure comedy with some misunderstanding here and there really adds to the flavor. overall it's a novel i would like to be chosen to be translated.
it was a great story. the author just did amazing job, I am currently recommend this for you who want trying something new. the outline and even the way he tell the story makes me more enjoying this .✨??
Raw................................................................................................................................................
This right here is a big hidden gem. I really enjoyed this read a lot. The way the author develops everything was perfect for me. If you see this comment just give it a read
I agree with what the other reviewers wrote. It definitely isn't the best novel out there. And understand why there maybe exist people that wouldn't like it. But for me, it is the only novel in a long time that I feel I have actually enjoyed reading. I Have read up to chapter 345 as of this review. And except for a couple of chapters between chapter 168 and 174(don't know exactly the reason just had to take a lite break from the story before returning to it), I would say that every chapter has brought me joy when reading.In the beginning, the misunderstanding felt a little(very little) forced. But now a couple of dozen chapters in, the misunderstanding feels to happen naturally to me. And that is a massive improvement. It would be boring to read a story where the author had to constantly take away the Protagonist's brain cells, to create a misunderstanding.Worldbuilding may not seem so great in the beginning, but as the story has moved along more and more details of an amazingly large world are revealed.Writing Quality I would say is good, there might be a few grammatical errors now and then, but I can easily overlook them.Story development is good, the plot moves along nicely, and at a steady pace. Some chapters now and then might be just fillers without plot, and just containing something ridiculous. But the author makes up for that with 3 chapters every day, many of them filled with plot development.Character design is where this web novel shines I believe. As the author himself said, this Is a book about a character going through constant misunderstandings. And to make those misunderstandings happen without totally cutting away half of the Main and other characters' brain cells. Is amazing to me.The only problem that I stumbled upon when reading the chapters was the author's unique writing style, but when I got used to it, it was that writing style that made me enjoy this book so much.If you are hesitating whether to read this web novel or not, at least read the prologue and you will get an idea about the story, characters, and the author's writing style.
Please continue with the translation! Do it! Please continue with the translation! Do it! Please continue with the translation! Do it! Please continue with the translation! Do it!