The way you changed the writing style from the first chapter of the seconds arc is just amazing, I cant wait to see the next chapter!!!
Interesting story, so was the character. It was actually more interesting for me to read this novel than usual because I have also written a novel where the MC is extremely OP at the start but the setting was different.
I'm really enjoy this twist on wuxia novels, bringing in elements of a different cultural context... definitely a novelty. I'm eager to see how the story continues to develop
5/5Wow, a work that displays the author's imagination （三ФÅФ三）I think that this book is descriptive enough that you can imagine the scenes (●ↀωↀ●)Good job, please continue this! (=^-ω-^=)
Hehe I love this already. I don't know how to describe it, but right now it feels like that the world building and the power systems are very well built and organized. It's very tightly knit currently (unlike how some world buildings that are very loose), and I hope the plot would also be very tightly knit. I especially like the new unique setting of this novel. I'm really grateful to find something different, yet well executed in webnovel.Keep up the great work author! (Also I love the two mcs XD)But I'm also anxious to find out what the second half of the title will mean for the story. But we're barely into the story so- []~(￣▽￣)~*
The flow of chapter is really interesting not a singlr detail is left out unexploited. leave you with a sense of horror for a long time and you keep thinking about what will happen next
This is good author, I enjoyed what I’ve read so far. It has a good storyline and the characters are on point. Continue with the good job author
The first chapter is an excellent hook. I could see why the people would say the MC is annoying, but he seems like a realistic college student. I'm going to keep up with this story.
another reader, looks good, congratulations, brasil??✌️??✌️??✌️??✌️??✌️??✌️??✌️??✌️??✌️??✌️??✌️??✌️??✌️??✌️??✌️??✌️
Five stars for this!!!! waited since the end of DD3! A fan of Tan Jia San Shao and his DD series!!!! This will definitely be as amazing as the other three if not more!!!!
So far, this novel is very interesting and entertaining to read. This novel is also very unique since the MC is reborn in the body of a failure in life(gambler/smoker/drunkard) who already has a family(beautiful wife and daughter). Which also has virtual reality game elements in it. Therefore, recommend people to read this who like this sort of stuff.(reincarnation/weak-strong/poor-rich/virtual reality/?harem???) Only noticible defect is writing quality, which isn't so terrible , but not totally amazing. I rate it at about 7.5-8.5/10.(depending on reader standards.?
littke rough around the edges but decent read...hope for more updates... 140 characters