Chapter 220 Review-Overall great read for picky and broad viewers alike. It’s been a while since a video game novel has been this good imoAt first interactions feel a bit empty and the language doesn’t flow well, but it’s drastically improved over time. There are still some “he/she” mixups though.The story and world are all very good. The plot progresses nicely along the main character and everyone feels real. There are some things that don’t make sense like the MC’s ability to fight things stronger than him. Even if he has extra stats per level, some of these enemies with their level would one shot home before he could blink, so it feels like the MC wins for no reason sometimes but it’s entertaining regardless.
The story summary has intrigued me very much, will definitely check it out! The novel world is vast!
Finally..they improved their QualityBest Novel recent Months of trial.Our MC is Man of culture..... Really into Furry.From plot to character development to World development is Quite Good.Translation Quality could be more better.I will Totally Recommend this.Story is interestingThis Novel have many flaw but overall Good Novel.To Properly analyse this Novel 60 Chapter needed. 40 chapter doesn't do Justice
Surprisingly Good. I admit that I kinda didn't liked the first five chapter, but the following chapter really got my interest. Although the MC is a bit OP-ed but still his a bit balance with the unique personality. I could tell what anime this story got its reference from, Full Metal Panic.That's why my expectations for this story is higher as well other fan of this anime. Good Luck!
Pretty good. Not a lot of good zombie stories so hopefully you keep writing. Wish the chapters were a bit longer other than that it’s great. ?
Hello, everyone, I am the author of The supreme sovereign system, phamtonbullet, I just wanted to say a few things , believe me I am doing this just to express my opinion and not to shamelessly add reviews to the novel :v , so here we go:1) I know that my nick name is writing wrong, it should be phantombullet but It was already taken, uwu.2) I always read your comments my beloved readers, every time that you post a commend in any chapter, I read it. I know a few of you who always thanks me for the chapter, I really, really appreciate it.3) As you may already notice, I have problems with the grammar , I am really sorry about that, I always feel bad about this, I am planning to take a few days to edit all my past chapters (1-25). I am using a few grammars correctos, and I am trying to find someone to be my proofreader(this was a suggestion from you) , in conclusion , I will do my best to give all of you a writing quality that you deserved.3) As I was saying, I always read your commends, I know a lot of people have been complaining about the fact that I called Artemis, Artemisa. Well, the thing is this, I have ALWAYS called her by that name xD . I planned to leave it that way, however, to give you a better time in reading the novel, I changed to Artemis in chapter 30 and it will stay that way from now on.4) This novel will be a long one, The adventures of Alfonso are just beginning, some of you have asked if Alfonso will get superpower and fight by himself, well, I won't spoil you, so I won't answer, I will only say that Alfonso would have to use his head more than his muscles...(he is crippled anyway, :v)5) I will now(02/07/2018) put a bonus chapter system, however , to have them, I will have to shamelessly ask for your votes(spirit stones) , this bonus chapters will be given depending on what position we ended on the week:- Ranked between 90-80 : 1 bonus chapter- Ranked between 70-60 : 2 bonus chapters- Ranked between 50-40 : 3 bonus chaptersI will stop there, lets be honest, we have a long way to get to further positions, when this novel consolidates itself better , I will do another system of bonus chapters.6) I usually post 1 chapter per day.7) Finally, I want to thank you all of you who follow the adventures of Alfonso, please keep looking forward for it! And for the ones who are just reading reviews, what are you waiting for?Alfonso Lockheart command you! Read it!
I had to stop reading this at Chapter 233. I advise readers to read with precaution as it could have a negative impact to one's mind. All due to the MC and (I don't know about this) the Author's philosophy about life.The MC is mentally disarranged to the point where he has no sympathy after his mother's death. You can consider him no different from a beast in this world. Made me realize that the other characters are more human compared to the MC.But, the story and the ideas are interesting. I just had to drop it because I felt that it isn't worth my read anymore.I usually don't mind cold MCs.. but this one is like a robot. I don't consider Noah human anymore.
very good book, loved it
i love it.
Love the story in this book,really enjoy it
I really like the story
please update more chapters