For a Naruto fanfic, it’s not bad. There are a couple naming issues here and there, with one or two characters ending up having Chinese and English names which obviously stand out next to the Japanese names (though idk if they had Japanese names originally but translators kept fighting over which one to use).The story starts off pretty weak, ngl, but it picks up momentum near the middle and pulls you along for the ride right til the end. Kinda wish there was an afterstory slice-of-life style for the MCs life cause I wanna see what he accomplishes, but I guess the author thought there would be no big plot left to discuss.But imo there is definitely room for an sequel, since the MC made a lot of changes to the world already. I wouldn’t mind even if the story ends up just being MC playing around as the “giant hand behind the scenes”, manipulating the people of the world to go on adventures and stuff.All in all, a pretty decent reading experience if you know what you’re getting into. Nothing that will blow your mind, but will get some chuckles out of you.
Warning: it's easy to be scared and in awe of Xiew He at the same time.Overall it's not that bad of a story. It's easy to get carried away by everyone's acting tho.
I think I just got punkdShe went full digimon and digivolved
Update pls
Woah. The first chapter was captivating. Imma read more of this.
İ do really like this novel
10/10 quite engaging and fast updates
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Beautiful, well done, amazing, its honestly one of the best novels ive written and theres only like 9 chapters!! cant wait for moreee!!!!!!!!
fantastic storyline.
praise worthy work!
absolute page turner.
not the typical drama ? story which we most often read.
great work dear author.
I absolutely love your work. ?
MUST READ ???
I really like the novel it's pretty great the beginning is good and I like the world building ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️?????☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
it's just a trash novel, where author is trying to make it funny but it only worsen it and mc is so dence that he doesn't know what a bra is and he held it up and asked the female lead that 'is it her face mask' infront of the public!!!!!