Everything is good and amazing, but there are a few issues that should be listed.1-The demon. He has unconditional mind control and memory viewing. This is just OP and should be revised. 2-The system. It is literally put down by a low ranked demon for no reason other than to slow development. 3- The teleportation. Every character and their mother has teleportation. This needs to be changed somehow. It serves no right that a low ranked demon adventurer can teleport, but the guard captain of a city lord cannot. 4-The world, no one has cellphones or even communication devices using magic, but they have advanced potions to translate literal gibberish to fluent language.
I like the concept I give 5 starsPlz don’t dropI hope u won’t drop I go read this novel nowGood luck in writing! d(￣ ￣)140 characters140 characters 140 charactersThis is to fill 140 characters
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Very good narration. Hope to continue working on it. It depicts what truly I am expecting with the epilogue of the original novel. It's make me happy to know what will happen in it even though it's a fan make. I hope the author continue the work even if the release is slow I will wait for it because it worth it. Thank you very much for the effort. Godbless
hola no se si estarás leyendo esto autor pero espero que continues esta gran historia, en los 6 años que estado esperando una sola actualización me han traido mas ganas de leer el siguiente capitulo.
are you dropping this author????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
This translation is worse than the other groups translation.Please leave this one alone. There is nothing worse than a reduction in translation quality.
I love this book so much. I can't wait for more chapters, and I'm very glad that I picked this as my trial read. I anxiously await the next update.
it's a grammatical mess, because it's translated to English with Google translator, you need a English editor or something else, ...........
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This is stolen from Ryuugi's The Games We Play. This isn't even a repost, but entirely taken and reposted as one's own. So uh... don't read/support this plagiarism.
Classic chinese braindead mc. "I got an amazing power let's show off mindlessy to everyone". If you like a moronic level grind it's your story.