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"Xue'er." He answers as he comes down next to her. Not in a way of gliding elegance, but like a flash of lightning appearing out of nowhere.
'What could happen if she were to be lost in thought while outside? She is the most beautiful creation in existence. There should be a lot of dirty things thinking about impure thoughts about her and since she was not able to perceive her surroundings, she is taken advantage?'
She waved her hands like she was shooed some pesky flies away as she approached towards the bed.
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My honest to goodness review: I hate to stop reading upto chapter 2, although I find the story interesting and the plot was piquing, but the lack of proper quotations and the space in between words were giving me a hard time to read thoroughly. Polishing needs to be done, dear author. I like the setting though, of course, it's the Philippines. My country.
thanks for hardworking. This is a good novel.You must read.And Thank you for continuing the translation.We will wait new updates.Have a nice day
A great story and unique due to the mc not being overpowered and being a teacher. the way magic is implemented is interesting and leads to a lot of interesting applications. I do feel the current arc about learning about and creating a sect due to a missing teaching license a little bit contrived since it doesn't really feel like it would truly be impossible to get a teaching license for the mc, especially with his connections. I think it's somewhat unnecessary but even if still great fun to read, though I find that just giving the mc a teaching license might have been more closely keeping to what the story is especially good at being the mc teaching his students.
Preferi ler todos os primeiros 30 capítulos para opinar de forma justa, valeu a pena. As únicas críticas que eu posso fazer é sobre os erros de gramática e coesão que ocorrem em boa parte dos capítulos, não estraga a experiência, mas é importante notar. Quanto ao resto, só elogios. Fico feliz de ter estudado inglês o suficiente para aproveitar esse livro. Seria incrível ver isso se tornar um anime (SAO 3.0). Os personagens são legais, o mundo é bem legal e as habilidades literalmente saíram dos videogames! Referências aos animes e outras obras também ocorrem. Adoraria deixar minhas teorias sobre as próximas raças que aparecerão, entretanto, prefiro teorizar que o Xablau, Raphyx ou Mr. Dark, serão pelo menos citados no futuro.
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The story could be built up better. Nice concept, but you ruined it with your how you started. You could have made it less cliche, but even if you had to make cliches couldn't you have made them better?If you want to make cliche stories, make good cliche stories. Don't make it a half assed effort. You could have made it better but you ruined it. Disappointment.
Absolutely brilliant story, with a very unique concept. I wish someone takes it on to complete the translation. I think we can open a thread on this site to request support and demand for further translation.